| "Never Forget" Reviews/Comments [ 13 ] |
Title: BRAVO!!
Reviewed By: hellcat805 On: November 16, 2003 17:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
BRAVO!! BRAVO!! O MY GOD, I realy enjoyed this story so much. Great job.
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Reviewed By: Lita Starwind [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2003 12:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
U better not leave it there! that would be really evil!!!!! Plez post the next chapter soon!
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Reviewed By: Tash Q. On: October 28, 2003 21:10 CST
Comment/Review:
Loved it! Please upload the last chapter. :)
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Reviewed By: hellcat805 On: October 28, 2003 18:49 CST
Comment/Review:
That was short but good and i'm glad you updated it. Hellcat805
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Reviewed By: hellcat805 On: October 16, 2003 15:14 CDT
Comment/Review:
I can't wait for the next chapter. This is realy getting good.
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Reviewed By: crystal dragon On: October 15, 2003 17:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your ability to incorporate all the sex so fluidly into the Ronins' lives. It doesn't feel out of place or just random acts of lust. You were truly able to capture their feelings for each other and manipulate them enough to make them seem pure and real. Great job. Can't wait for more updates; the suspense is killing me!
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: hellcat805 On: October 13, 2003 19:32 CDT
Comment/Review:
Wow that was....interesting. I still say the title of this stoy should be called "Somebody's watching me" but then again thats just me. I also think you are doing a good at this story. Good jod,keep up the good work. Helcat805
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Title: better
Reviewed By: hellcat805@yahoo.com On: September 30, 2003 20:18 CDT
Comment/Review:
Oh my god,this just keeps getting better and better. I so can not wait for chapter 5. Plaease hurry. Hellcat805
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Reviewed By: hellcat805@yahoo.com [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2003 15:39 CDT
Comment/Review:
So this was the real chapter 3 huh. This fic reminds me of the song "Somebodies watching me" by Micheal Jackson.Hey that should be the name of this story. Hellcat805
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Title: wrong story?
Reviewed By: Zani never feels like signing in On: September 24, 2003 23:37 CDT
Comment/Review:
I think you might have gotten your stories mixed uo when you downloaded them in. That chapter three you have for Ronin Warriors apparently belongs to your Digimon. I don't know if anyone has told you yet but I thought you might need to know. Well I can't wait till you update with the real chapter three to Untitled till then I'll hold off with my review of the story but so far so good.
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Reviewed By: hellcat805@yahoo.com On: September 24, 2003 18:12 CDT
Comment/Review:
Its not as good as the last chapters but I liked it. Hey I also that im the only person that has review this story.Whats up with that. Hellcat805
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Title: Pretty good
Reviewed By: hellcat805 On: September 14, 2003 18:31 CDT
Comment/Review:
That was pretty good.I can tell that something big is going to go down in the nest chapter.I can't wait.
Hellcat805 |
Title: hellcat805@yahoo.com
Reviewed By: Hellcat805 On: September 08, 2003 15:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think this will be a good story,I already like the first chapter.As for the name of this fic,I think it should be called 'My Baby'.
Hellcat805 |
