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Reviewed By: Devil1 On: November 07, 2003 23:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's much more color; very interesting and excellent.
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Title: Ch 15
Reviewed By: mookienh [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2003 01:41 CDT
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This was a perfect point in which to introduce what happened in the past. David's meeting with Duo was there, albeit fleeting, and Milliardo's approach and blunt appraisal of him was great. And now we know where Milliardo heard that line about darkness and light.
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Reviewed By: Momma Cat [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2003 00:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I agree with Crescent, this story does need to be a best seller. I think that who ever thought OC's aren't interesting, is wrong. I like not liking Keiko and hoping she get's more then a slap across her face. If your not gonna kill her have Heero mess her up, or Relena and she get into a cat-fight, reooooowww! I love Hikaru and feel bad for her. At the same time I feel bad for Odin for being neglected, but its wrong to cheat! I'm not sure if Yukuzi is good or too 'possessive', but she loves Heero so I'm game! David's side of the story is what is really making things interesting. I mean, Duo getting into fights and the 'naughty' things that happen at night. Wow. I'm really into this.
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Reviewed By: Link Worshiper On: October 13, 2003 09:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Poor boys! I really hope Duo figures out how friggin' cute he and Heero are, 'cause it's making me into a puddle of goo as we speak! Whoohoo! Keep it up, my friend!
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Title: Ch 15
Reviewed By: MookieNH [MediaMiner Member] On: October 11, 2003 02:13 CDT
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WOW. The proverbial shit is really hitting the fan with a vengeance. Milliardo intrigues me greatly, and it was satisfying to see Keiko finally get slapped. This chapter has a lot of different elements. Mystery, suspense, and the underlying sexual tension. The brief glimpse of the past between Odin and Yuki was a nice touch as well.
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Reviewed By: Leemaxyui On: October 07, 2003 12:45 CDT
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Oh it would be soooo cool to have Heero find out that Mill is David. I wonder what Duo will do since he still loves David and all. I think that it will be a good story.
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Title: Continue!!!
Reviewed By: IcaBob On: October 04, 2003 00:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Continue SOON!!!! I hate cliffhangers.
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Reviewed By: Omni-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2003 08:19 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I want you to know just how much I love this. It's currently after 9AM, I have to work in a few hours, and I haven't gone to bed yet because your lovely fic distracted me during my late night/early morning insomnia-induced net browsing. I told myself hours ago to go to bed and get some sleep because of work, but I couldn't pull myself away from this fic. It's great. I'm being very VERY serious. I've read so many fics, GW and otherwise, and rarely do I stumble upon ones that nab my attention so strongly. I look forward to reading the rest of this as it comes out, as well as any other future works from you. It's cliche to say, but keep up the good work. ^_~
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Reviewed By: Sai On: September 23, 2003 18:57 CDT
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Ahh to many things to say. I tried to review before but for some reson it didn't show up, hopefully it'll work this time. Okay your story is awesome. And Duo has quite a past now doesn't he? And Keiko she, she /takes deep calming breath/ ahh not gonna work, she is such a bithc. She's gonna get Yuzuki, the only person who's actually trying to protect Heero and Duo, fired. That so totally suck. But anyway congrats you've made the perfect villan, the one who, gets what she wants, get in the way, and get away with it, perfectly hateful. This story is going to get angstier before it gets better isn't it? It's okay I love angst. Though that last part made me feel better, I really hope Duo does indeed have control of the situation this time, it give hope. Sorry for the long review hope I din't bore ya and update soon pweeeeess. ^__^ I'll leave ya now. Laters
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Title: Momma Cat
Reviewed By: Momma Cat [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2003 22:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Oh my gad... yes gad. This is the most wonderful story I've read this week! Lol actually longer then that but don't be insulted, I read a lot. Good job I can't wait to see what happens! |
Reviewed By: Tarma On: September 20, 2003 21:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GReat ficy! |
Reviewed By: Danes With Fyre [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2003 17:27 CDT
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Wow. After reading this, I feel really bad for Duo. He really is getting *f*cked* in the long run. >< Poor Duo and Heero, and how his cousin wants to destroy Heero's happiness by trying to get Duo. >< I like this and I can't wait to see more. ^_^ |
Reviewed By: leemax [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2003 14:25 CDT
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This is really good! You have got to update sooner come one. PPPPPPPPpllllleeeeeaaaasssssssseeee! Well hope that you write soon. ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Suzume Tori [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2003 23:40 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AWESOME! **cheers** omg, this is fantastic... write more! **whines like a brat** YOU Mu~uuu~ust write mooo~ooo~ooore! |
Reviewed By: Spiriel On: September 09, 2003 09:22 CDT
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So far, this is a great story. This is the first 2X1 I've thoroughly enjoyed. Don't take too long on the next chapter!! Can't wait for it. ^_^ |
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