| "The Proliferation of the Lotus Flower." Reviews/Comments [ 61 ] |
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Title: *faints*
Reviewed By: Freak_on_a_Leash [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2004 16:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ohh bob...I love it so! Fang Face....and all the other nicknames...and Yugi is naive in this one..but hey its cool and I love it so -huggles fanfic then pounces the writer and huggles- Awesome job..can't wait and I hope you update...hehehe Peace! till next time
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Reviewed By: Maruken On: March 01, 2004 22:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sorry but I have just GOT to go with Malik/Fang Face. How will Ryou react to Malik's "wants" anyway? Yugi's a little TOO naive for his own good. He frickin asked about BAKURA'S personal life. BAKURA. You don't EVER need or end up wanting to know about that. Will Marik meet his master again? Will Ryou finally snap from two "Mariks"? NEED TO KNOW!!! I'M SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO GLAD YOU UPDATED! Remember, you write, I review.
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Reviewed By: shadow_kazul [MediaMiner Member] On: February 29, 2004 19:40 CST
Comment/Review:
yami and yugi! more yaoi of them! the only yaoi i like is with yami/yugi of bakura/ryo. so MORE!!
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Reviewed By: Med On: February 27, 2004 18:33 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is such a cool story please write more it is very creative as well
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Reviewed By: Maruken On: February 26, 2004 23:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sweets...... YOU'RE GOING TO BE EATIMNG YOUR SPLEEN IF YOU DON'T UPDATE!! You know, I've been looking for an inexpensive target to practice archery, and I might have just found it, or HER.
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Reviewed By: Maruken On: February 23, 2004 20:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
UPDATE!!!
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Reviewed By: Maruken On: February 18, 2004 20:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can give you so many reviews I'D MAKE YOUR COMPUTER CRASH!!! But that's not the point, the point is..... I NEED MORE Malik/Fang Face!!!! NOW!! RIGHT NOW!! THIS STORY IS A GOOD SIZED PORTION OF MY LIFE!! YOU DON'T WANT TO BE A MURDERer DO YOU? DO YOU?!! THEN UPDATE!!
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Reviewed By: Maruken On: February 07, 2004 20:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
UPDATE!! It took you REALLY long for this one, please update faster next time. YAY!! I love the Ryou as a vamp and the nickname, fang face. Make Ryou stronger though, okay? How's Marik gonna react to seeing Ryou on the ship? I bet Ryou's asking for death around now, that or repeatedly banging his head against a wall and cursing every god and goddess ever known. Now he's stuck on a boat with TWO Mariks! Poor poor Fang Face. I LOVE THAT NICKNAME!! LOVE IT!!
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Reviewed By: celia On: February 04, 2004 19:42 CST
Comment/Review:
wow! this is so great!!! i was laughing out loud, and people thought i was crazy, lol. XD please, keep writing!! ^_______^
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Reviewed By: Maruken On: December 31, 2003 00:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it!! Please make Ryou a better fighter. Marik and Bakura really ARE the screwiest couple, in every way imaginable.
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Reviewed By: TabiWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: December 25, 2003 15:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lol this is really funny! TabiWolf
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Title: ... T_T;; Make the reviewing weirdo shut up!
Reviewed By: Mezra... On: December 07, 2003 17:55 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm going to give up in about 2 seconds. I keep trying to rant in the reviews section and it WON'T LET ME!!! Here REALLY is the rest of the comment I keep TRYING to post. ~Ryou really can be spelt without the u, so there's no need for you to "get it right." If I were you, and for the public safety it's good I'm not, I wouldn't have been so nice with my rant. ^__^;;; Anyways... There really was a point to this second review! Ignore mean and stupid people who leave moronic reviews, and do what YOU want because YOU are writing the story for US little people to enjoy! Oh... and... because it offended me... you're *so* not dumb. ... erk... sorry about MY little rant here. >.>;
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Title: ... again...
Reviewed By: Mezra (Mezradeath@aol.com) On: December 07, 2003 17:53 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my god, I'm a review stalker... O_O;;; There was more to my second comment than one sentence... apparently my internet didn't like it, lol... here it is... >.>; Again. Erk... I just read the reviews that, probably, incited the talk about the name situation. DEFINATELY don't listen to people who tell you that they are "nice" by telling you how to spell a very optional name. >..>;
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Title: ... again...
Reviewed By: Mezra (Mezradeath@aol.com) On: December 07, 2003 17:51 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Erk... I just read the reviews that, probably, incited the talk about the name situation. DEFINATELY don't listen to people who tell you that they are "nice" by telling you how to spell a very optional name. >..>;
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Reviewed By: Mezra On: December 07, 2003 17:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just wanted to let you know that I'm loving your story, I think it's very creative, and it's definately humorous! As regards to the slight name-spelling rant, I do agree with you. There are a lot of Japanese names that can be spelled different ways. I speak Japanese, so technically, the romanji way of spelling Ryou's/Ryo's name would be "Ryo", or "Ryou" because there is a hiragana letter/symbol for the character Ryo. Ri+yo would be slightly different pronunciation. ^__^ But I agree with you, in most cases, that it doesn't REALLY matter how an author spells a name - as long as the reader knows who is being talked about. I really hope I didn't come across as being critical... T_T;; I probably did... eeks. *worry* But I certainly don't mean that I'm saying you can't spell Ryou's name however you want, ^^ I'm just happy that your writing such a wonderful story! Arigatou! (... *still worried she sounded critical* ...) @-->--- Mezra
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