| "The Proliferation of the Lotus Flower." Reviews/Comments [ 61 ] |
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Reviewed By: QueenFool [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2008 16:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love, one of the greater fan minds here, people!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: nonny On: August 07, 2005 17:21 CDT
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Okay, I agree with the cast of the story, you call that en ending? Come on! You have got to do something with the rest of the cast! What happened to Jou and Seto etc.?
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Title: WHAT!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: ~Kitten~ On: July 23, 2005 11:41 CDT
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WHY DID YOU END IT! THIS IS SUCH A COOL STORY! YOU BETTER BE PLANING A SEQUAL WHERE YAMI COMES BACK FOR YUGI!
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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2005 07:36 CDT
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I didn't think it was bad as long as there is a sequel. I want to see the couple together.
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Reviewed By: Reiky On: July 01, 2005 08:19 CDT
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Like your story. Interesting. I just don't want Yami and Yugi to fall apart at the end :( Update soon!
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Reviewed By: Tenshi of Time [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2004 04:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi Sweet, I can't belive I've finally found you. I've been searching god knows where to find you and by pure coincidence I stumble on you here. I've read all your Yu-Gi-Oh stories (I think) and it was cain's lovely balls that got me hooked on Nightwalker. i love this story...in fact I love all the stories I've read of yours and I can't wait till you update. Till then Bye Tenshi of Time -x-
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Reviewed By: HappyDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2004 00:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I go away for a bit, and come back to not one, but two updates. Better yet, one's a Lemon! Yes, it was high time Yami got his virgin ass, now I can't wait to see the fallout of lying to Yugi. As always, your work is magnificent, everyone truly feels in character. Your attention to detail really shows through, particularly in your reasoning in waiting to heal Yami. But one thing that I've been wondering about is Jou. He's definitely not what he seems. Perhaps we humble readers might get a few more clues? Well, good luck writing your fictions!
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Reviewed By: Shaded Faith [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2004 16:52 CST
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I... love you so much... it's scary XD Nyaaa - the long awaited lemon where Yami and Yugi gets some nice action XDD!! And better yet, some sadistic vampiric love!! *hails* Kyaaa! Love you muchies, darling! Update soon!
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Reviewed By: DemonandGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2004 15:21 CST
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Short. But the lemon made up for it. “Yami crooned some bullshit reassuring words-“ It'll all get better soon, yeah. I like that for some reason. Stands out for some reason. "Can you do that part again? I wasn't paying attention." Suuure, Yugi, I bet you weren't paying attention a lot, were ya? "…just let me breathe for a little bit, I… that was nice…" Nice. Right. "Only my name-" OMG. So hot. OMG. YES. ^^ Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: Beysie [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2004 20:16 CST
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Ahhh, thanks... I needed that lemon! I thought it was well done... Now, what do you have in store for the rest of the crew and the story? I'm curious... please update soon!
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Reviewed By: Beysie [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2004 19:48 CST
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Kawaii... please update again soon, I can't wait to see Yami and Yugi together! LOL Yes, I'm getting straight to the point today... *evil grin*
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Reviewed By: DemonandGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2004 04:55 CST
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Oh my lord. Half tempted to go over there and molest you if it will make you write more. Ya know, if it weren't for the fact that that probably wouldn't help, but I am currently trembling over the OMFGWTFBBQOMGOMGOMG-ness of this. Vampire sex! "But talking was not a good option; it meant he was acknowledging the existence of… well… existence. And if you know existence; it can be very persistent in existing." One of the best lines ever.Please, please, please update soon.
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Title: *Teleports into shoebox to save Sweetdeily, Ninja style. Grabs Sweet’s hand then ports out.*
Reviewed By: HappyDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2004 16:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I know you could have saved yourself, but consider it my penance for not being able to review you as often as I'd like. *Golden Dragon ports in to throw up a yami wall around the three.* GD: Don't need them killing you two while you talk. HD: ^^;;; Right! Anyway . . . Glad to see you're still working on this. This chapter was fun, the whole thing about the cure/blessing is interesting. It was funny to see a few more references to your Perenial Beings fics. Love seeing the way Yugi is changing, reacting (and not reacting) to Yami. The stuff between Seto & Jou is cute as always, and the Malik Ryo ending . . . No I don't want to kill you. You're right, that did feel like it just should have stopped there, we really don't need to see the pain and torment Ryo is about to be put through. *Turns to Ryo* Which Is Something You Could Thank Her For! . . . Unless you're a masochist. *Turns to Malik* Besides If She's Dead, How Will She Write Future Lemons? *Notes reaction* GD: Here. *hands over talisman keeping the shield up to Sweets* Break it when you want the wall down. Come hikari, you need to work on your fic and stop bothering the nice writer. HD: ^^;; K. *Both disappear in puff of smoke, Ninja style*
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Reviewed By: Shaded Faith [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2004 22:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*Super glomp* Nyaaa! You updated *worships* Luf the chappie, nyow! Gasp! Such a teaser XD *bribes with cookies* Update soon, luv!
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Reviewed By: kharma On: November 19, 2004 11:32 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Just one thing...more YamixYuugi! (also, are you planning on updating today is purple anytime soon? ^_^)
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Reviewed By: Ryu Tiamat [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2004 09:21 CST
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Yay! New chapter! Looks like Yugi's starting to turn into a swashbuckler himself! Surely while he was living in the palace he would have balked at the thought of lying...but...Woohoo! Yami's alive and...hm...okay, recovering, he's not quite well, not yet...update soon! Can't wait for more Yami and Yugi stagetime!
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Reviewed By: Beysie [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2004 05:02 CST
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No, how cruel! I'm with Malik... how could you stop there! That's not fair, I wanted a lemon scene really bad! At least Yami is safe now... but why would he lie about saving the captain? Hmmm, unusual... ok, update soon, Please?
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Reviewed By: Beysie [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2004 02:23 CST
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Oh, man... I keep coming across your unfinished stories. In case you haven't noticed, I'm currently going through all your works and reading them. I have a habit of doing that with authors I like... Now, I remember somewhere in this fic you had mentioned going to Japan around this time of year... Lucky you if you did go! I'm currently studying Japanese right now too... there's just no way I'm gonna get to go to Japan any time soon though, need money for that! I hope that you will come back soon though, and I do also hope that you can continue these unfinished fics. You have such a good imagination and creativity, it would be a waste for you to stop now! I just love all your swashbucklers in this story! I hope you get to update soon! Well, now I'm off to find another of your fics...
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Reviewed By: Sheighla aka spellhorn On: October 03, 2004 21:22 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
here *hands sweets a cookie* thats your incentive to write FASTER! I want to know whats happened! I know you wont kill Ymi 'cause he and Yugi haven't even had sex yet! so hurry up and update so we can find out how Yami was saved! Love spellhorn
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Reviewed By: SnakeMistress On: September 18, 2004 11:37 CDT
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this is great. one of the most different and best fics i've read that is Yu-Gi-Oh. i really can't wait for the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Ryu Tiamat [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2004 10:08 CDT
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Nooooo! Yami! You better not kill him or...um...well, damn, I can't threaten to kill you because I swore I'd never threaten your life because I absolutely loved 'Exfoliation' and 'Reincarnation'...plus if I killed you, you'd never finish 'Kio wa murasaki des (Today is purple)'...and that fic is just getting good and I want you to finish it...so...hmmm...okay...just don't kill Yami or I'll cry on you! BTW, I loooove how you make Yugi so kickass! Please update this fic and 'Kio wa murasaki des' soon!
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Title: Dear Gods She Lives! Hazah!
Reviewed By: HappyDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2004 01:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
First 'The Exfoliation of Perennial Beings', and then 'The Reincarnation of Ephemeral Existence'. Gods how I love them both . . .Ok so the second is a continuation of the first but I digress. Also I'm sorry that I have yet to leave a review for any of your stories, just odd luck really. So I must say that with as much as I love your YGO works, I'm happy that your muses helped you to update. Now if you could do it again or for your other fics . . . ehe . . . no one would get that until I posted my first fic. Yes look what you have gone and done, inspired another to write. . . . . . Well to write YGO Yaoi goodness that is. ^___^ Now I just need to type up a suitable amount before I post. Still you shall have more reviews from me in the future, and for your other YGO fics too. Just know that there are those out there that don't think your writing sucks, and I'm one of them. XD I look forward to the next chapter, and since I have you on my favorites I'll know when that chapter comes. I hope that you find joy in writing and continue to write for years to come.
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Reviewed By: DemonandGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2004 19:10 CDT
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*hits head on desk* I can't believe I didn't read this till now! *hurries up and puts fic on favorites* Pirates and vamipires and mages... and YGO! Squee! Yugi is so innocent... and so sweet! No wonder Yami practically melts! ^-^ PLEASE update soon!
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Reviewed By: Shaded Faith [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2004 12:49 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! Thank you so much for updating =]!! Haha, yes, Yuugi is da man now XD... ahahaha XD! Oh, and kudos on Ryou being awake again - vampire mages rock ^^. Please update sooooon and here's an internet cookie for your work *hugs*!
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