| "The Proliferation of the Lotus Flower." Reviews/Comments [ 61 ] |
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Reviewed By: Maruken On: February 26, 2004 23:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sweets...... YOU'RE GOING TO BE EATIMNG YOUR SPLEEN IF YOU DON'T UPDATE!! You know, I've been looking for an inexpensive target to practice archery, and I might have just found it, or HER.
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Reviewed By: Maruken On: February 23, 2004 20:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
UPDATE!!!
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Reviewed By: Maruken On: February 18, 2004 20:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can give you so many reviews I'D MAKE YOUR COMPUTER CRASH!!! But that's not the point, the point is..... I NEED MORE Malik/Fang Face!!!! NOW!! RIGHT NOW!! THIS STORY IS A GOOD SIZED PORTION OF MY LIFE!! YOU DON'T WANT TO BE A MURDERer DO YOU? DO YOU?!! THEN UPDATE!!
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Reviewed By: Maruken On: February 07, 2004 20:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
UPDATE!! It took you REALLY long for this one, please update faster next time. YAY!! I love the Ryou as a vamp and the nickname, fang face. Make Ryou stronger though, okay? How's Marik gonna react to seeing Ryou on the ship? I bet Ryou's asking for death around now, that or repeatedly banging his head against a wall and cursing every god and goddess ever known. Now he's stuck on a boat with TWO Mariks! Poor poor Fang Face. I LOVE THAT NICKNAME!! LOVE IT!!
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Reviewed By: celia On: February 04, 2004 19:42 CST
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wow! this is so great!!! i was laughing out loud, and people thought i was crazy, lol. XD please, keep writing!! ^_______^
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Reviewed By: Maruken On: December 31, 2003 00:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it!! Please make Ryou a better fighter. Marik and Bakura really ARE the screwiest couple, in every way imaginable.
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Reviewed By: TabiWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: December 25, 2003 15:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lol this is really funny! TabiWolf
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Title: ... T_T;; Make the reviewing weirdo shut up!
Reviewed By: Mezra... On: December 07, 2003 17:55 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm going to give up in about 2 seconds. I keep trying to rant in the reviews section and it WON'T LET ME!!! Here REALLY is the rest of the comment I keep TRYING to post. ~Ryou really can be spelt without the u, so there's no need for you to "get it right." If I were you, and for the public safety it's good I'm not, I wouldn't have been so nice with my rant. ^__^;;; Anyways... There really was a point to this second review! Ignore mean and stupid people who leave moronic reviews, and do what YOU want because YOU are writing the story for US little people to enjoy! Oh... and... because it offended me... you're *so* not dumb. ... erk... sorry about MY little rant here. >.>;
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Title: ... again...
Reviewed By: Mezra (Mezradeath@aol.com) On: December 07, 2003 17:53 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my god, I'm a review stalker... O_O;;; There was more to my second comment than one sentence... apparently my internet didn't like it, lol... here it is... >.>; Again. Erk... I just read the reviews that, probably, incited the talk about the name situation. DEFINATELY don't listen to people who tell you that they are "nice" by telling you how to spell a very optional name. >..>;
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Title: ... again...
Reviewed By: Mezra (Mezradeath@aol.com) On: December 07, 2003 17:51 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Erk... I just read the reviews that, probably, incited the talk about the name situation. DEFINATELY don't listen to people who tell you that they are "nice" by telling you how to spell a very optional name. >..>;
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Reviewed By: Mezra On: December 07, 2003 17:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just wanted to let you know that I'm loving your story, I think it's very creative, and it's definately humorous! As regards to the slight name-spelling rant, I do agree with you. There are a lot of Japanese names that can be spelled different ways. I speak Japanese, so technically, the romanji way of spelling Ryou's/Ryo's name would be "Ryo", or "Ryou" because there is a hiragana letter/symbol for the character Ryo. Ri+yo would be slightly different pronunciation. ^__^ But I agree with you, in most cases, that it doesn't REALLY matter how an author spells a name - as long as the reader knows who is being talked about. I really hope I didn't come across as being critical... T_T;; I probably did... eeks. *worry* But I certainly don't mean that I'm saying you can't spell Ryou's name however you want, ^^ I'm just happy that your writing such a wonderful story! Arigatou! (... *still worried she sounded critical* ...) @-->--- Mezra
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Title: uh.....don't know^_^
Reviewed By: yamiyugifanadic On: December 03, 2003 13:07 CST
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MY GOD!!!!!!!!! WERE ARE THE LEMONS!!!! you only had 1!!! Make more!! you said there would be lemons!! I NEED LEMONS!!!!!!!!1
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Reviewed By: Queen of Eternal Darkness [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2003 16:47 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it's coooool ^^ continue soon plzz?
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Reviewed By: Phidias The Bagel On: October 16, 2003 19:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I Wanna See More! You Write Such Yummy Yaoi Fanfics And Such Yummy Pairings Too!
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Reviewed By: phoenixhazel On: October 08, 2003 21:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oye! I normally don't read too many alternate universe fics, but your summary caught my attention, and reading what you have through now I'm really glad it did. Your ideas for this fic are really original, and your portrayl of the characters in this alternate universe is actually believable. So what if the names are not to another's liking. It's a flarking name! You can head off and call Yami dark, and Yugi game and as long as I knew who you meant I wouldn't give a damn! *hugs* Don't let any lil nit-picking shit heads get you down! Anyways! I hope to see more of this! You're an awesome writer!
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