| "The Proliferation of the Lotus Flower." Reviews/Comments [ 61 ] |
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Reviewed By: brina On: October 08, 2003 11:42 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*hugs* I understand what kind pressure you're going through. I really like the new chappies. ^_^ Keep up the good work. MistressCoCoLoVeR
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Reviewed By: lothlaide On: October 07, 2003 03:35 CDT
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Wow! Great pirate story, the only Yu Gi Oh one I've ever seen. Please continue soon!
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Reviewed By: Daydreamer Chibilady On: September 24, 2003 13:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Person your story is great!! I love the whole concept of it, the way that you portrait the characters and the light in which you show them in an alternate universe. Yami Yugi as a pirate captain is a very interesting concept, and having him working with and not against the other Yamis is another factor of enjoyment. Nota Bene: It doesn't matter how you spell the names. If people are familiar with the series then they will understand who you are talking about. Not to mention the fact that at least some of the characters have two versions of their names, the ones in the dubs and the ones in the Japanese market. Believe me, you're doing great. You story is excelent. If there is one note on which I'd dare to step on, then it would be a selfish bequest that you postpone any intimate interaction between the pirates and the captives. It's just no fun to be reading a story and suddenly the characters are humping right in the very beginning of the story. Yours is a jewel in a vast dark cavern. I just hope that it will continu doing so. And please, update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: Kilam On: September 22, 2003 18:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I am immensely impressed with the story line and find this story to catch the eye at first glimpse. I am interested to see more around the topic of Marik being abducted by the opposing side. I enjoy the pairing Marik X Bakura and hope to actually see more of it than Yuugi X Yami. You see, I find Yuugi X Yami pairings to be way over-done and not interesting, nor do I enjoy them. So, I request more focus on the Ryou(spelt with a U) X Malik pairing and of course lots of Marik x Bakura. I shall review once again as soon as I find chapter four to be added to this wonderfu, creative piece.
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Reviewed By: Yuki-tenshi On: September 07, 2003 22:16 CDT
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Ooo this is getting exciting! i cant wait to see what happens next! update soon ^__^ |
Reviewed By: Crying Forever On: September 06, 2003 23:15 CDT
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la la..great chapter!!!!!!! can't wait for chapter 3!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Crying Forever On: September 06, 2003 23:14 CDT
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Too cool!!!! i really want a lot of Malik/Ryo action!!!! oh, and by the way pally, his name is spelled ryou...not RYO!!!!!!!!! get it right, or people won't be as nice as i am and read your fic..they'll think you're dumb or something...getting his name wrong! |
Title: Niiiiiicceee!
Reviewed By: MistressCoCoLoVeR [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2003 23:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like this story! Update soon damn it! I will be waiting! This a jewel in the ruff that needs to be polished and defined! Keep up the good work! |
Reviewed By: dragoneyes On: September 01, 2003 07:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, this was really exciting. I love all the little accents and is Mokuba a gnome? You've really built up the suspense really well and I'll be waiting for the next installment. |
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