| "Marik's Insane Plot or Bakura gets pissed!" Reviews/Comments [ 97 ] |
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Reviewed By: Calcifer [MediaMiner Member] On: May 13, 2008 06:55 CDT
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Finally finished this. Was laughing the whole time. Honestly, it was hard to stop reading. And the story annoyed me so much.... Keep up the good work! ~Angel
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Reviewed By: Calcifer [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2008 19:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 2 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I hate this story. The plot is ridiculous, the characters are out of character, and scene changes are abrupt. I can't stop reading this. It's just so fascinating, I find myself staying up late, trying to read more... You astound me. heart Keep up the good work! ~Angel
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Reviewed By: Kurayami Ryuu [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2006 12:44 CST
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*whimper* OMG... that ending was... *sniffle*... so touching...! XD Oi, I lurve this fic to death! So friggin addicting, kind of like chocolate, or coffee ice-cream (mmm, coffeeeeeeee and iiiiiiice-creeeeeeam...). I've been reading it for like a week now, because I'm slow like that, and let me tell you that it's a miracle anything could keep my attention that long! Many thanks to Tjay Motou for hooking me up ^^ I shall definitely remember the life-changing experience of reading this for years to come! *stamps with Fanatical Yaoi Fangirl's Seal of Approval*
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Reviewed By: emo On: May 10, 2005 23:48 CDT
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i really like it so far ryou's family are still all GODDAMNED BITCHES but anyways i noticed you wanted to know where you can get doujinshis? well here is a site where you can get all sorts of doujinshis. the address i am going to give you will lead straight to the yugioh section but you can access other sections from this part of this part of this site. even though they might not have what you want at the moment all you have to do is go to the top of the page and click on the words "show unavailable items" then click on the title of the doujinshi you want. you will then notice on the right side of the screen there will be words that say "i am looking for this item" a little bit above that there a box asking you for your e-mail give your e-mail and click on the words stated above. as soon as the item becomes available, they will e-mail you. okay nowfor the link http://jpqueen.com/onlineshop/searchresults.asap?KEYWORD=&TITLE=yuugiou &AUTHOR=&Lang=&CATE=&SKIP=0&OPT= well i hope i have been of some assisstance to you keep writing!
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Reviewed By: emo On: May 10, 2005 21:51 CDT
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This is a really good fic unlike other fanfic writers you spell well and it has a really good plot line.And every story needs an evil villian,and your story has one of the most evilest of evil villians i have ever heard of.and by the evil villian i mean ryous stepmother.THAT EVIL GODDAMNED BITCH!HOW DARE SHE INSULT RYOU!AND SHE EVEN INSULTED THE MIGHTY THEIF KING BAKURA!I BET SHE IS AN ESCAPED CONVICT FROM JAIL! HELL NOT EVEN THE MOST CUTTHROAT OF PEOPLE WOULD SAY SUCH THINGS! SHE IS NOT HUMAN!SHE DOESNT DESERVE TO LIVE!SHE DOESNT EVEN DESERVE TO BE CALLED SHE!FROM NOW ON I SHALL CALL HER AN IT!I DONT KNOW IF SHE EVEN DESERVES THAT MUCH!HOW DARE SHE TELL RYOUS FATHER TO STOP TALKING TO RYOU . 89 IKJLO,KJMHGF VASDAS
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Reviewed By: Yami No Marik [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2004 20:59 CDT
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This was one funny story. I liked it and the pairings.
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Reviewed By: Miroku's Sweet Baby and Seto's Sexy Slave On: May 31, 2004 20:35 CDT
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If you had continued that story any longer, I'm pretty sure that I'd be in the hospital from laughter...my ribs are so sore from reading your story...You should make the new one just as funny! I love your humour and sense of bizarreness...Yami/Yuugi Seto/Jounouchi Ryou/Bakura...those were some great pairings LMAO! Ja Ne my friend!
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Reviewed By: DugFinn [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2004 01:20 CDT
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Hahahahaha!!! How amusing that you can just say, "Welp, I'm currently borded of this fic sooooo, the end! Poof! New fic!" Heh, heh. I'll bet lots of people will be disapointed, ne. Oh, well. Good run while it lasted! Oh! And yes! Damned Truce thing! It's an annoyance on eBay for me too! I was telling a few of my geeky(er) friends about my extreme obsession with Bakura when they look at me funny and are like, "The guy from the Star Wars book?" And I'm like, "Star Wars?! What the hell are talking about?!?" Yeah... Heh, I can't wait to see the new fic! I'll bet it'll be as great as this one! You're great a satire, yo! Keep it up! And get ready to dodge many angry rippened tomatoes from the hands of disgruntled fans. If all goes well, they won't /completly/ kill you for ending the fic like this, heh. Ja, till the next fic!
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Title: Fin
Reviewed By: Sweet-deily On: May 31, 2004 01:00 CDT
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That's the end... ahh well, it was good while it lasted. *wipes tears from her eyes* I shall read this new story you speak of, but only if it lives up to your standards. If you want anyone to beta for you, send me an email at sweetdeily@hotmail.com !!! Good story! Well done! *claps*
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Reviewed By: PerfectCell17 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2004 12:53 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awwww ending so soon? Anyways, I loved every chapter!
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Title: *bursts of giggling preceeding*
Reviewed By: Sweet deily On: May 21, 2004 01:39 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh babe, you got it covered! *winces as she rights her chair* I love your funny way of writing this story, although I hope that wasn't the last chapter. Lol, I think you've made fun of just about every genre there is in this story, and boy, has it been good. Have you considered writing stories for certain cliches? You should enter YWL's cliche contest, I think you'd bag it! Here's the url: http://www.geocities.com/ywl_cc_again I hope you enter something, if only so we can read more of your brilliant work!
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Reviewed By: PerfectCell17 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2004 16:32 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loooooved this chapter! It was soo funny! 'Oooooooh Malik!' lol Poor Malik, oh well! Please update again soon!
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Reviewed By: KuraMagicianGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2004 22:59 CDT
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That was... unexpected, kinda. Lol All in all it was funny. I wonder what's next. Ud soon. Ja ne.
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Title: The wheels in Marik's head go swish, turn, splat!
Reviewed By: DugFinn [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2004 22:05 CDT
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Ah, I love the absolutly pointlessness of this fic! That last plot twist at the end, were Malik lets Ryou go to go chase after Malik, my gods! Genius! Complete genius! It's so great, how this fic completly doesn't take itself seriously! Ah, I'm sated for the next week, until the next chapter comes along, hopefully soon, heh, 'cause the fic is freaking amusing!
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Reviewed By: KuraMagicianGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2004 23:01 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Noo! There's no more. I want to read more now. Lol I loved it. It's so hilarious and deliciously fun. I do wonder what poor Ryou is going to do now. And I wonder how will Marik react when he finds out Ryou is no longer a virgin and what's he going to do about it now. Ud soon. Pretty please? Ja matte ne.
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Title: LilMizTake63@aol.com
Reviewed By: Deb xxx On: April 17, 2004 15:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOL!!! This story is so great!!! I wonder what Mariks gonna do now that he has Ryou in his grasp hehehe!!! AND when he finds out hes no longer a virgin and that Kura deflowered him hehe!! Please update again soon!! This is great!!! Lotsa Luv Debs xxx
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Reviewed By: celia On: April 14, 2004 19:31 CDT
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aaaaaaaahahahahahaha! roflmgdao.. i love this fic! it's perfect! keep updating.... ^_____^
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Reviewed By: The Future Schuyler On: April 12, 2004 23:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOL! This was FUNNY! XD XD XD XD XD Keep writing!
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Title: Creamy goodness
Reviewed By: Sweets On: April 12, 2004 20:07 CDT
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All I can say is lol. *chuckles* Yay for Marik, he finally did it! I was just wondering, shouldn't the story be 'or Bakura gets laid'? not pissed because... he gets laid... *shrugs* Meh. ^^ I like it anyway.
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Reviewed By: RyokoMink [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2004 12:34 CDT
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Heh heh. Thanks to Marik now I will never hear Relena's stupid voice. Gods I hate her... As well as Anzu. But the point is,I really love your fic. Nothing better than watching, I mean, reading about Mariks insanity. Ah, insanity... How I miss thee... *Gets attacked by Marshmallow Peeps* Mmm... Marshmallow... Ow.
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Reviewed By: DugFinn [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2004 11:56 CDT
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Heh, heh. Was the business man Kaiba? Is that CEO /ever/ gonna make a move on Jounouchi? Eh?! Ah! And Marik finally got Ryou! Ooh. Bakura's gonna get veeeery ticked. Eeh! What will happen now?!
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Reviewed By: PerfectCell17 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2004 16:36 CDT
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Yay, another chapter! I love this story, please add more soon! I must read more!
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Reviewed By: DugFinn [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2004 07:18 CST
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Whoooo!!! Bakura /finally/ got some!! Heh, the Cassy person was amusing! I've started reading so many Ra damned fics only to find the damned Mary Sue creatures all dominating in the damned story! Ah! Good death to the Mary Sue Thing! Hahahaha!!! And Marik with the Borg?! Genius, I tell you! Genius! I can't wait to see what happens now!
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Reviewed By: anime*otaku On: March 23, 2004 01:30 CST
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Mm...cake ^^; Marik in a conga line ::snik:: That was great! Looking forward to the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: RyokoMink [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2004 20:47 CST
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Ryoko:Heh heh. That's very funny... Torturing us is amusing isn't it? *bursts out laughing and falls to the floor* Mink:*stares at her otherself* She's remembering Marik in a conga line...-_-;
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Reviewed By: Maruken On: March 22, 2004 20:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ohhhh, what's Marik going to do for a virgin sacrifice NOW?
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Reviewed By: Rowan Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2004 18:03 CST
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O.O what the heck!
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Reviewed By: Rowan Girl not logged in [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2004 18:03 CST
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I love the new chapter! Ryou finally gets what he wants!
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Reviewed By: PerfectCell17 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2004 13:03 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful as always! Please update! Hope you're feelin better now!
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Reviewed By: AMK [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2004 06:07 CST
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WAH! Good for Bakura! He finally gets what he wanted 20 chapters ago! *pauses* Although I must say, I didn't think he could hold out that long. Um... what are they going to do with the cake? *crickets chirp* Never mind...................... and yes! Yes! Oh, sweet, tender, lucious peeps! Cut down heartlessly in their prime! How we mourn you! How we pine for you, you, snatched so cruelly from this faithless world! Is nothing sacred? Oh, peeps! Never more shall the wind caress your soft, sugar-coated bodies that contain the ultimate prize! A rich trove of delicate, creamy marshmallow beauty! Alas! It is precious, and as all precious things, time travels on and they are swallowed by the mist! Oh, but why? Why, why, WHY? *sniff* Oh, peeps! We hold a period of utter silence, in honor of your beloved memories, and pray such tragic events as this will fail to repeat themselves. *long silence* Amen.
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