| "Marik's Insane Plot or Bakura gets pissed!" Reviews/Comments [ 97 ] |
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Reviewed By: AMK [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2004 06:49 CST
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I really don't get the Hilton thing but thats ok... cause the rest of this rox! ^^ You really need to update soon. Pwease? Pwease? Pweeeease? Pwetty pwetty pwease with sugar and whipped cream and hot fudge and cherries and sprinkles on top? Hmmm... *goes and eats ice cream* Anyhow, UPDATE SOON! I'm not begging again! All right, the hell with it, i will beg, but only cuz this story rules. *gets down on knees* PLEASE!!!!!
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Title: Hilton here they cum!
Reviewed By: Sweets On: February 22, 2004 23:10 CST
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Hiya, Sweetdeily here again. Anyway, You know how much I love this! It's just awesome! I think the Hilton part was the best bit in this one, although the Marik and Yugi dialouge was funny too. Marik is kinda... stupid... but hey, what are psychos for?!?! Anyway, are we ever going to hear or see Bakura and Ryou having sex, or will you torture us poor faithful readers forever... cause... thats... just... just... NOT FAIR!!!! Love the story, lookin' forward to the next chappie!
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Title: Hehehe
Reviewed By: Sweets On: February 18, 2004 00:25 CST
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Now, You KNOW how much I love this wacky story don't you??? Lol, You seem to have the most awesomest slamming for mary-sue and crossovers. *chuckles* Anyway! I was wondering, does Malik like Marik... I mean, I know Malik thinks his Yami is a complete idiot and possible psycho, but is there some kind of silly childlike appeal that the Yami does for Malik's... er, hormones? Anyway, what I'm getting at is Bakura and Ryou having sex! and Sooon. *Never mind she just jumped subjects* I can't stand the way Yami keeps breaking it up I mean, does the term 'cruel and horrendous torture' mean anything to you? We want booty! and we wants it soon! Although... I love this story, it always brightens up my day!
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Reviewed By: Dirty D done dirt cheap! On: February 16, 2004 22:31 CST
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*mad laughter* He doesn't even remember why he kidnapped him. And Kaiba talked the wench's ear off! ^_^ Poor Baku' though... damn Yami. :)Greatness Red!
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Reviewed By: AMK [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2004 17:30 CST
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Bwa ha! Oh, poor bakura- will he never achieve his goal? poor, poor bakura.... marik is just kind of- an idiot. so funny- lol. Update soon! ^^
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Title: Haha! Will Bakura ever get any?!
Reviewed By: DugFinn [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2004 17:30 CST
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Oh, that's great! Yami has a nack for screwing Bakura over, ne? Hm, poor choice of words, heh. Oh, and Ryou was so willing too! Ha ha! You know, Bakura just might wanna help Yami, or he'll never get rid of the Pharaoh, no da! And Marik... Has he taken his medication yet? I'm guessing no.
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Title: *snorts*
Reviewed By: Sweets On: February 06, 2004 00:04 CST
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I didn't think they'd actually do it... I seriously didn't.... *chuckles* but it was funny. Lol, poor Ryou.... poor Borg....
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Title: he started it!!!
Reviewed By: Sweetdeily [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2004 17:30 CST
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Lol! You are a master of your art. *bows* I shall now worship you, if you dont mind. *prays* update soooonnnn.... update sooooonnn.... verrryyyy gooooooooo-o-o-oddd *in mantra kind of tones here.* lol, but seriously, i *love* this story, you're very, very, very, very seductively talented. I hope there's a Jounouchi and Seto lemon in there somewhere.... for me???? pwease???
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Reviewed By: AMK [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2004 23:12 CST
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What is it with Yami and Yugi? First the airport and now this?! Well, i suppose if ryou and bakura do it on the cake that would be worse- but priceless! definitely priceless. lol.
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Reviewed By: technical dragon On: January 22, 2004 17:48 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
pleaze update!!
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Reviewed By: Bakurik On: January 22, 2004 10:40 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story keeps gettin better and better! Can't wait til you write more!
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Reviewed By: BIG_DADDY [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2004 00:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
I enjoyed this fic... well... kinda, sorta, maybe. You see, I didn't really enjoy the way you talked about the gods and stuff in the first chp. and that probably pissed off alot of readers who are a different religion. Even still I enjoyed it but I still think you should take into consideration next time and be more careful about how you select your themes. P.S. This is not meant to be a harsh review or flame so don't get on my case becasue that's happened to me heaven-knows-how-many-times.
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Reviewed By: Momma Cat! On: January 20, 2004 22:32 CST
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What is it with Yami and Yugi doing it in public places? I'm not complaining just wondering! What prevs they are. ^_^ Is it almost that time? The crowning moment of the 'cake'? I look forward to it!
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Reviewed By: Toko-kun [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2004 20:02 CST
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ROFLMAO I haven't laughed this hard at something in a LONG time. Absolutely hilarious!! LOL You ya I'd be happy to take Marik offa your hands if he's givin' ya too much of a hard time ^.~ Anyway, awesome fic!
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Reviewed By: Bwuebewwy Sugar Pwincess On: January 20, 2004 17:22 CST
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Wow.... wow....wow... DUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUDE!!!!!
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