| "Entering Another Realm" Reviews/Comments [ 155 ] |
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Reviewed By: LunaWilderness On: January 10, 2011 07:09 EST
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Reviewed By: kkinkajou On: May 05, 2010 23:54 EDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 2 of 10
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I couldn't read past the first page. The grammar was just awful. Sentence fragment, misplaced modifiers, and lack of punctuation prevented me from enjoying this story. I can overlook some grammar errors, but when it's this terrible, I can't read it.
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Reviewed By: Nyuka [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2008 01:58 EDT
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Wow I loved the story....I really hope you make a sequal....I want to read how you plan their lifes are going to be ....I can't wait untill you do make a sequal because you so can not, not make sequal...THE STORY MUST CONTINUE....Pllllllleeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaasssse....I weill be so happy if you do...I at very least can you create an epiquil to tie up loose ends ...Please....X3....I like the fact that Youko didn't have to die...but I also am really sad for Suichi...or Kurama...because I mean can you imagin haveing the kind of power he had and then not being able to use it any more....the value in life would deffenetly be deminished.....He would feel so useless......personal I don't think it fair for him.....pout*......please create a sequal I want you read more I would be so happy................................Nyuka
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Reviewed By: SISTERINLAW19 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2007 12:32 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
brilliant
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Reviewed By: bonbonsworld On: April 28, 2007 16:20 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ooooo myyyyyyy goddddddddd i luv it its awesome ive been reading it over and over thanx 4 written it i luv it u hav got to write more stories like that nice job again
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Reviewed By: inuyasha_1234 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2007 23:35 EDT
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I have to admit that this is a really good fic, although I don't like the idea of Kurama dying... I wonder if Hiei will still be able to at lest have some contact with Suuichi or Youko? Lord knows that he needs a friend, and Kurama was his only real one. I have to admit that I missed the lemons that could've came with Youko being one of the main characters ^^ Yours always, ~Mari-chan~
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Title: good
Reviewed By: Kagome093 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2006 11:45 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
good job i think you couldve gone further into how kagome kept comparing youko to inuyasha and i honestly didnt understand the 'big plan' at the end but overall it was ok
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Reviewed By: foxgirl94 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2006 19:02 EST
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awesome story.
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Reviewed By: hg On: July 28, 2005 16:12 EDT
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The story was most funny and romantic.I think that you most defanitly make a epilogue.I never new Yoko was so possesive.thanks for writting it.
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Title: Love you
Reviewed By: Fox Vixen [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2005 17:16 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
make a epilogue.
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Reviewed By: deza667 On: May 10, 2005 21:27 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WRITE MORE!!!!!!!I DEMAND THAT YOU FINISH THIS STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: End of story
Reviewed By: ptbear [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2005 00:03 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
How about a sequel.
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Reviewed By: SSR (offline) On: April 03, 2005 00:16 EST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
EPILOGUE! EPILOGUE! EPILOGUE! EPILOGUE! EPILOGUE! EPILOGUE! EPILOGUE! EPILOGUE! EPILOGUE! EPILOGUE! I demand an EPILOGUE! Truthfull, I loved it. There were a few grammar errors and little things like that and irked me (damn my english teacher for making me a grammar obsessed editor), but I really did love the story. But...now I can't dream about beautiful Kurama...I mean Suichi! Pfft, oh well. Keep writing!
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Reviewed By: ayame_urameshi On: March 22, 2005 12:49 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLZ write an eplogue thing how ever u spell it! ITs so good i think there should be an e thing lol
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Reviewed By: firedazzle16 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2005 23:28 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really whant to see an epilouge now. What the hell happens. sniff sniff.
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