| "Entering Another Realm" Reviews/Comments [ 155 ] |
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Reviewed By: inuyasha_1234 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2007 23:35 EDT
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I have to admit that this is a really good fic, although I don't like the idea of Kurama dying... I wonder if Hiei will still be able to at lest have some contact with Suuichi or Youko? Lord knows that he needs a friend, and Kurama was his only real one. I have to admit that I missed the lemons that could've came with Youko being one of the main characters ^^ Yours always, ~Mari-chan~
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Title: good
Reviewed By: Kagome093 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2006 11:45 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
good job i think you couldve gone further into how kagome kept comparing youko to inuyasha and i honestly didnt understand the 'big plan' at the end but overall it was ok
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Reviewed By: foxgirl94 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2006 19:02 EST
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awesome story.
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Reviewed By: hg On: July 28, 2005 16:12 EDT
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The story was most funny and romantic.I think that you most defanitly make a epilogue.I never new Yoko was so possesive.thanks for writting it.
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Title: Love you
Reviewed By: Fox Vixen [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2005 17:16 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
make a epilogue.
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Reviewed By: deza667 On: May 10, 2005 21:27 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WRITE MORE!!!!!!!I DEMAND THAT YOU FINISH THIS STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: End of story
Reviewed By: ptbear [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2005 00:03 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
How about a sequel.
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Reviewed By: SSR (offline) On: April 03, 2005 00:16 EST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
EPILOGUE! EPILOGUE! EPILOGUE! EPILOGUE! EPILOGUE! EPILOGUE! EPILOGUE! EPILOGUE! EPILOGUE! EPILOGUE! I demand an EPILOGUE! Truthfull, I loved it. There were a few grammar errors and little things like that and irked me (damn my english teacher for making me a grammar obsessed editor), but I really did love the story. But...now I can't dream about beautiful Kurama...I mean Suichi! Pfft, oh well. Keep writing!
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Reviewed By: ayame_urameshi On: March 22, 2005 12:49 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLZ write an eplogue thing how ever u spell it! ITs so good i think there should be an e thing lol
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Reviewed By: firedazzle16 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2005 23:28 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really whant to see an epilouge now. What the hell happens. sniff sniff.
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Title: your fanfic
Reviewed By: Shadowspirit [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2005 20:52 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey loved your fanfic!!!!! i was kinda disapointed about the ending =( i wanted it to be a little bit longer on mabye have an epilog or a second fanfic continuing this one but i still loved it!!! i would love it if you could write some more on this fic but thats just me p.s during the story kagome uses a lot of miko powers like the "miko wip" but really only when she is fighting yoko not in any fights with other deamons and near the end or when she was in trouble she did not really use any of it so what was up with that?! good luck in your writing and keep up the great work -chao
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Reviewed By: Kuramas gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2005 19:26 EST
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Yes! Yes! Yes! please please please write an epilouge. I beg of you! ok, well, ~~Kuramas Gurl~~
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Reviewed By: katiepatie [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2005 17:52 EST
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Your excuses for not updating are completely plausible.....being lazy is probably the one I like most...I might use soon for my fics (not that I am...it just takes me awhile to write something, then type it up)...I would be interested in reading an epilogue...^_^...PEANUTS!!!..-_-, sorry, left over hyperness from last night's sugar fest ^^
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Reviewed By: Ryukotsusei [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2005 21:52 EST
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interesting ending, it was quite cute. I wouldn't mind an epilogue. Hope you decide to make one!
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Reviewed By: kearseer On: January 11, 2005 10:51 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i read your story on FFNet it's good you can find me on ffnet my nickname there is kearseer. it's a good story although sometimes you take a long time to update.
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