| "Life Happened" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Title: Ch 5
Reviewed By: mookienh [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2003 04:57 CST
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Relena's potty mouth never ceases to amaze me! Heero's lack of tact was fitting, and I just love the ambiguity of his showing up with Trowa, of all people. Cue dramatic music...
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Reviewed By: sapphire 1 On: December 09, 2003 09:24 CST
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that was really enjoyable - you actually made relena seem nice - hope for more
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Reviewed By: Enna Namo [MediaMiner Member] On: October 05, 2003 13:40 CDT
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Duo and Relena as brothers at arms? Comrades of conspiracy? Ploting together against Heero? Exchanging pet-names back and forth? lol Well, just let Heero get to know of this and if he feels anything at all for Duo, he and Relena are in a lot of trouble. And going clubbing will give the press the oportunity to get a picture of them together. Won't that be a story?
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Title: Ch 3 & 4
Reviewed By: MookieNH1 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2003 17:24 CDT
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(swearing a blue streak under my breath at mm.org's insistence that I'm NOT logged in, despite how many times I've typed in my password...over and over and over...but I digress!) Have I mentioned how much I love the way Relena speaks? :) I almost died laughing at her comment that she was an "ass girl" - but ya know, that is actually a typical comment for a gal her age (unless it's just my group of friends, ha!) The line about Relena being a She-Heero or Barbie shoulder had me nearly on the floor. I love the way she approached Duo, and the friendship the two of them have forged, over the last two chapters. "Her pinkness" - aaaah! Their hopelessness in the light of trying to work out a plan for, well, wooing Heero, makes perfect sense, given their backgrounds. I really enjoy this story. It's entertaining, light hearted, and has a refreshingly different take on Relena. (She calls Dorothy "Dot"!)
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Reviewed By: Aoede On: September 20, 2003 20:19 CDT
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you're welcome, darling! n___n
lol. Relena's attitude managed to get a smile out of me, again. Nice chap. |
Reviewed By: DancesWithFyre420 On: September 18, 2003 20:39 CDT
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I liked this! And Relena in the story is the kind of Relena I like. ^^ I can't wait to see more!! |
Reviewed By: Aoede On: September 09, 2003 16:07 CDT
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OMG! a Relena-centered story! i like these... i like Relena's characterization. She's such a rambler, lol. Ya see, i like her a lot as a single character, specially with this kind of take on her. But i don't like 1xR at all. So... a perfect story for me. It even has 1x2 (my fav). It's nice to know her point of view on things... i'll be waiting for the next part, it gets interesting!
oh BTW, i'm assuming you're argentinian, right? lol. i'm chilean O_o;; |
Title: Ch 2
Reviewed By: MookieNH [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2003 19:18 CDT
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Once again, I like this version of Relena. Her internal rambling dialog is both humorous and refreshingly honest. Even the detail explaining why she was in the copy room in the first place was a nice lead-in to Relena's being in the right place at the right time.
I simply love the righteous anger she felt at hearing about the pilots, and her surge of protectiveness regarding Heero. The catty comments were rather funny, by the way. Kinda nice to see that others can tell that Heero and Duo are "dancing around each other."
Interesting speculation on the demise of Quatre and Trowa's relationship, as well as the possibility of something between Quatre and Wufei. Quatre is one person that I could see paired up with just about any of the others, for some reason, so it would be believable to me.
I look forward to further revelations from Relena as the story progresses. |
Reviewed By: Cherry Pie On: September 06, 2003 22:07 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I like yuor fic so far. Unlike alot of other fics which show Relena as some sort of twit, you've actually presented her with some originality. Please continue |
Title: Ch 1
Reviewed By: MookieNH [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2003 00:59 CDT
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An interesting take on Relena. I like her casual voice in this.
The situation with Heero and Duo can go in so many different directions - I look forward to seeing how you deal with all Relena's misconceptions.
Oh, and I almost fell over when Trowa and Quatre broke up. |
