| "Walking a Thin Line" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: Christi Morelei [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2004 05:34 CDT
Comment/Review:
Oooh, I liked this second chapter! Are you going to write more? I hope so. ^_^
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Reviewed By: White Fanged Wolf [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2004 18:33 CDT
Comment/Review:
It really didn't make me laugh much (it takes a lot to get me to laugh), but I really loved it. If you plan on continuing this, please make it quick. I'm curious as to who everybody likes and what Malik does... ::mischivious grin:: yes, I am twisted....
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Reviewed By: Bob J from around the way On: March 01, 2004 21:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Yo, this story is great. I wanna know what is going to happen to Yugi, and if Kanika is gonna get her a$$ whooped by Eden. Write more when ya can.
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Reviewed By: XxAllisonxX [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2003 12:39 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this story is funny. i never stopped laughing. keep writing |
Reviewed By: Sean Wright [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2003 09:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I gave this story such a high rating for the simple that I laughed through the entire thing.
It was quirky, had some some unexpected things in it, but it was a fun read. |
