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| "Sunrise" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] | Reviewed By: Sailor Comet On: February 20, 2004 23:49 CST
Comment/Review:
hm. It probably should have been 4 parts like you'd originally intended. The end of this felt a bit rushed... I would've liked to see more. ^.^;; But besides that, you know I loved it. ^_^ Mahaad was great, Bakura was [evil] great, Diabound was.... damn, kinda weak ^_~ ~Sam
| Title: Bonasi
Reviewed By: S. A. Bonasi On: October 09, 2003 16:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sukaigetsu-joshi, (
| Reviewed By: Sailor Comet On: September 23, 2003 19:59 CDT
Comment/Review:
Damn. That's good stuff. [heart] ~Sam
| Title: sa@bonasi.com
Reviewed By: S. A. Bonasi On: September 05, 2003 22:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sukaigetsu-sama,
Well, this fan fiction was really good. It didn't disapoint me, so keep up the good work. I really like you fan fictions, even though I'm not a fan of lemons or rapefics, even when they are as well written as this one. (Personal preference.) But it was a really good fan fiction, and it's nice to read something original, even if it is rated NC-17. Well, definitely continue, either this fan fiction or one of your others.
Bonasi-chan |
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