| "Bulma's Surprise" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Reviewed By: ivonna On: October 15, 2007 14:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cool Cool and COOL!!! i loved it!!! u're a great writer keep it up!!
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Reviewed By: Evil_Vegeta [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2005 14:04 CDT
Comment/Review:
Heh, I have just read curiousity and said that you had to review it only to find out that you've already done that!! It's just like the other one...perfect, hot and very arousing...I just showered!! I could use another one now...Thnk u for updating and good luck with 'the forgotten race' Lovies Evil-vegeta
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Reviewed By: sango-chen [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2004 01:19 CDT
Comment/Review:
okay, i just read both curiosity and bulma's surprise, damn! that's the hottest thing.... I swear if it wasn't 11 at night I'd be in a cold shower right now....
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Title: hurraayyyyyyyyyy!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: me On: September 22, 2003 09:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've read many fanfics, really more than 100, and it's really the BEST!!! Noone ever tried to write soooooo "hentai" style! I loved it! I enjoyed it very very very really very much! Hurrayyyyyyy!!!!!!!
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Title: words CAN describe...
Reviewed By: vegetakaiba [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2003 17:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was totally not expecting any of that to happen! That was shockingly good, for a sequel. You are the most talented hentai fic writer I've ever seen. It's just incredible what you think of. An unexpected turn of events, excellent buildup, and an insanely erotic hentai scene. What more can be said...you're just that good. Keep writing! |
Title: Cold shower please!
Reviewed By: Ember [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2003 11:31 CDT
Comment/Review:
That was one awesome lemon. I really need a cold shower now... and a Vegeta of my own *cries* I loved the intensity you managed to convey in it. I wish I could write smut like you. ^-^
*hugs* |
Title: HUGS!
Reviewed By: NSBVEGETA [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2003 05:52 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YO U DID IT!!!!!!!!!!!!! OH THAT WAS SO HOTTTTTTTTTT!!!!!!!!!! SSSSSS!!!!!!!!! CALIENTE PLUS 1 DAMN IT THAT WAS GREATTTTTTTTTTT! I LOVED IT!LEMON LEMON LOVED THE LEMON VEGETA U KINKY BASTARD HOW I ADORE U LOL!
THANK U FOR WRITING THIS VERY WELL DONE! If you need help with your other fic contact me I'll be more than happy to lend u a hand my e-mail is nsbvegetadbz2033@aol.com
LATER! |
Reviewed By: Lullaby On: September 05, 2003 05:42 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Lol This is so funny and cool ^_^ Vegita is just a kinky one ^_- Well, I must say that your writing is excellent when it concernes lemon! Go on and write more when you want ! |
