| "Love or Money?" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: frozen_in_shadow [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2004 15:01 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Kyaaaaaaaa!!!! Write more please!! It's cool!! ^_^ Keep up the awsome work!!!! I'll be waiting and i'll keep readin!!!
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Reviewed By: Lonely_Destiny [to lazy to sign in] On: February 29, 2004 20:19 CST
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*sniff* evillllllllll cliff hangersssssss whaaaaaaaaaa update!
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Reviewed By: petite_angel [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2004 21:45 CST
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Your story is fantastic. You go into extreme detail and everything is so accurate. You're truely a great writer and I love your made up chracters. I'm sure everyone forgives you for that late chapter. Anyone in your position wouldn't be able to focus on a fanfic either. I'm sorry to hear about your father and I hope you're doing okay.
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Reviewed By: panny-chan51792 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2004 09:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my gosh! I wish I thought up that!! That was sooooo awesome! I hope you write more soooooonnnnn!!!!!!!!!!!! And I am a bigggg fan of Pan and Trunks so write more!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: sugarholic On: November 16, 2003 10:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
great story! u just have to be a little more careful when you're typing the story so that u punctuate correctly. u dont have to use commas in certain places, but other from that, great story! it's very fluent and an easy read^_^
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Reviewed By: Cha Seew Bow On: September 28, 2003 16:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a pretty good story so far! I gave you a 7 on spelling and grammar only cause you had spelling mistakes and stuff. Please update soon! (By the way, Trunks should totally choose love over money. It made him seem a little selfish that he was even considering it when even though he said he totally loved Pan)
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Reviewed By: Pan and Trunks Luver On: September 27, 2003 04:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's obvious who he chose. Be happily married to the woman he loved, and life without money or be UNHAPPILY married to the woman he OBVIOUSLY no longer loves in order to continue having money. It's Pan and Trunks choice on what they do. Not anyone elses. Why can't Trunks get enough money out of whatever savings accounts he has before his mother shuts him out of them that'll keep him and Pan secured until one of them gets a well paying job. They could just move out of Satan City and go where no one knows, and live around people who don't care about the age difference if Pan's already past the legal age, and start over from scratch.
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