| "The Mystery Baby" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: Lonely_Destiny [to lazy to sign in] On: March 16, 2004 12:46 CST
Comment/Review:
thats real good. but you shouldn't slack off just because your in highschool! update! and who's the father to Alex's twins? WHO IS IT?! is it a dbz character?
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Title: The Baby
Reviewed By: Toughlytiger(Tiana Thomas.) On: February 09, 2004 16:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have a hunch that Sam is .... the father, or Clover . This is a Clovex,Saex fic right? Thought so. J.p:*Is Pregnant with Zoe's child*"I like the fic!" Takuya:(!_!)"I like it, but who is the father of her children?" Neemon:"This fic *Laughs , Laughs.* makes *Laughs,Laughs,Laughs.* Bokomon seem like he didn't a child!" Bokomon:*Slaps Neemon's pants.*"Neemon this is a good fic, but Alex should doing some missions of instead giving birth to twins!" Alex:*Mad*"What you are saying that I should fighting instead of having my kids?" Bokomon:*Nods*"Yes you should be." Neemon:"She's cool."*Points at Sam* Sam:*Blushes, then flushes.* Well I er ..." Bokomon:*Slaps Sam's pants.* "Will you stop Blushing &Flushing!" *I am sorry .* (It's just I wanted Alex say to something like she just said.) (The music for whenever "Bulk &Skull in M -M PR "Appears.) Me:"""Bye!!!""" *End*
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Reviewed By: Hiro23 On: December 30, 2003 13:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is funny,lol but hoo got her pregnant>? and are any dbz characters in this? ne way its funny and kool write more!please
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Reviewed By: alex 11 On: December 24, 2003 09:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
could u write more chapters this thing is funny
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Reviewed By: LegolasLuva02 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2003 11:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whoo this is the longest story I ever wrote, I usually write chapters that are only like one hundred something. Yea Legolas rocks *grabs legolas outta no where and starts hugging him while he's struggling to get away* I wuv you Legolas even though I don't know how to even say your name. :D |
