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| "Dangerous Assumptions" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Reviewed By: Faye273 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2004 23:05 CST
Comment/Review:
Why did you stop your fic?? I really want to know what happens. It's downright mean to leave it at the climax of the story T_T. Let me know if you decide to continue this fic (please,please,please). Oh and one thing, you must be young (or a man) because you got one thing very wrong. Women's cycle's last only 28 days. You should make sure to change that
| Title: uhhhhhh
Reviewed By: princessann [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2003 15:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
just to imform you ahh chapter 5 and 6 were the same on ya continue soon ill be waitng!!
| Reviewed By: Michiru On: September 22, 2003 01:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm still not sure if this is going to be Inu/Kag, Kouga/Kag or Sess/Kag, but whatever it is, I like it a lot. Instead of dramatic magic solutions, just having Kagome talk things over with people she trusts is a great way to do this story, especially since you're doing it so well. Talking can be very boring if written wrong, but you've got it right; the darker bits keep me interested, and the little snatches of humor break things up. I'm really looking forward to what's next!
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