| "Project Hope" Reviews/Comments [ 63 ] |
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Reviewed By: Whitney Lin13 On: November 19, 2003 23:00 CST
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OMG! I know who the demon is!! I think its Yura of the Hair?? Maybe, not sure, but thats all i could come up with and it took me about 5 mins to think of that. Lol, please continue soon!
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2003 22:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Shippou is so cute!!!!!!! You spelled Sesshoumaru's name wrong but that was the only big thing so far. Naraku should just give it up! Update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: InuKitsuneMiko(not signed in) On: November 15, 2003 08:32 CST
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hey lets just say they had to go into a cave and kagome's clastrophobic... but nobody knows she's clastrophobic... AND SHE GET'S REALLY SCARED AND HAS A CLASTROPHOBIC ATTACK WHATEVER THAT IS! hehehe... just want inuyasha to save her, got noffen against kagome at all!
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Reviewed By: InuKitsuneMiko(not signed in) On: November 15, 2003 08:29 CST
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a bomb?! creepy...
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Title: Random
Reviewed By: Shadowed__light On: November 14, 2003 14:37 CST
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O.o A bomb? HUH? You realize how unbelievably random that was? *blinks trying to get un-confused, but failing*
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2003 08:46 CST
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Did you mean a real BOMB fell on them!!!!!
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Title: please please continue!!
Reviewed By: princessann On: November 04, 2003 00:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please continue ill be waitng oh ya e-mail me when you do because your story is very interesting!!and i would like to read more so please update my e-mail is:acyoung28@hotmail.com talk to you then!!
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Reviewed By: InuKitsuneMiko [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2003 19:10 CDT
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damn u i want more please!
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Reviewed By: mikokinu On: October 22, 2003 03:36 CDT
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love it!!! very original!! keep going...can't wait for the rest! just a little note(everyone seems to get this wrong so don't worry) Inu-Yasha's mother's name is Lady Shinju...just thought I'd let you know! H.E.P....they perform 'experiments' and 'breeding' on hanyous ^-^ anyway, keep going. if you get stuck or need words translated in Japanese I'm the one to talk to! e-mail at jamy@cox.net love to hear from ya!! mikokinu
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Title: Hey!
Reviewed By: Slywolf9 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2003 20:58 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey! i really like your fic so far! very kawaii! hehe! i noe how u feel about the reading and not reviewing thing! my one fic has 2,000+ hits, but only 13 reviews! sigh, ah well, not everyone is nice! well, i just wanna say that this is soooo good so far, and i cant wait till u update! umm...also, wuts waff? -.- i dont noe much yet....well, good job! hugs n kisses n lollies! Ai-Lani
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Reviewed By: Lizard Youkai On: September 18, 2003 18:22 CDT
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Wow, this is really a cool fic! the idea is so original! I can only hope that you continue to update it, regadless of wether or not people review it. |
Title: wow.....
Reviewed By: LottaLuvGurl [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2003 00:50 CDT
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i love this fic....please update soon! |
Reviewed By: Sundragon [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2003 19:42 CDT
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Great! I'm not a fan of dark fics but I think this is on fic that should go that route. I hope you update soon. Don't worry about people not reviewing. Some want to review at the end. |
Reviewed By: Yoraeryu (-not signed in because her comp sucks...) On: September 06, 2003 21:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well this is certaintly a different idea for an Inuyasha fic. Good choice, I must say. Very well-written, just a few quirks here and there but otherwise no major flaws.
I personally would have never thought of demons being ruled by humans, even with my psychotically evil mind. I think you should up the rating to R; it looks like this could be quite a dark fic with the right author. But... I'd like things to be upbeat... I totally go for fics with lots of WAFF in them. However, either angsty or fluffy, I'll still review for every chapter.
P.S.- Do you have a beta reader? I may be of some help if you don't. ^.^ E-mail me if you want to, ok? Ja ne. |
Reviewed By: debbie the rex On: September 06, 2003 12:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
soooooooooooooooooooo great update soon |
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