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Reviewed By: Demi On: January 01, 2004 10:32 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ekk that was great! Update soon!
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2003 07:10 CST
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OOOOOOOO somebody's in the hoooouussee! Is it Yura??? update soon
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Reviewed By: Hino Mitsukiko On: December 30, 2003 02:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
These aren't really reasons 4 ratings, just little notes to help u out. 1) haori, not haoru. hakama are the pants. 2) Sesshoumaru, not Sesshomaru 3) Inutaishou, not Inutashio 4) it's onii-chan. Souta calls Inuyasha Inu no nii-chan 5) Shippou, not Shippo 6) kitsune means fox, youkai means demon, hanyou means half-demon 7) Ya got Kouga right, but Kagome ALWAYS calls Kouga, Kouga-kun. Inuyasha ALWAYS calls Kouga yaseookami [wimpy wolf] and Kouga ALWAYS calls Inuyasha inukkoro [dog-turd] 8) NOT Yura of the Hair, Sakasagami no Yura [Inverted Hair Yura] 9) doujou, not jodo
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Reviewed By: chihiro-san [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2003 02:45 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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That was such a great chappie! Yayers! Oooo! Oooo! Oooo! Call on me, teacher! *waves hand excitedly in the air* Let me guess....did TYOTH (the yura of blah blah blah) throw the party in order to distract and/or finish off Kagome and the rest while the bad guys invade the hope? Am I right? I don't know. It's just a guess. Great idea to make it the new moon. Very choice. Also, before I go, I'd like to add this parting sentiment: I think that you're doing a great job, and I'd like to appologize for anyone who's flamed you, saying "update faster!" Personally, I think that it's great that you find time to write at all, what with all of your extracericular (*take your best guess at that word. I can't spell) activities. Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: Inubabie On: December 16, 2003 15:58 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was wonderful! AHHHH!!!! hurry and get your computer fixed!
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Reviewed By: Rukina On: December 14, 2003 23:38 CST
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Wow, you sure have a lot a computer problems. Kinda like me. Well, just wanted to say that I absolutly LOVE this fanfic. And I can't wait for the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness (not signed on) On: December 10, 2003 09:22 CST
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Wow kagome's dad was a 'I don't even have a word for him!'Please don't tell me that Naraku was that man!
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Title: Hey
Reviewed By: Slywolf9*** On: December 08, 2003 17:40 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey hey good chapter!!! poor Kagome!!! Oh my! But at least we know what happened to those ppl!!! Hmmm...wellz, good chappie! I cant wait for you to uodate again soon! -Lani
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Reviewed By: tobie_sky On: December 06, 2003 12:28 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was great! soo sad! Update soon^^
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Title: WELLDONE!
Reviewed By: kagOmE? On: December 05, 2003 13:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW! it was fantasitc!!!! i loved it but i think it would be better if u update atleast 2 chapies at a time ^-^ so we won't get bored..:D but it was really good! keep up GURL!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: InuKitsuneMIko(not signed in) On: December 04, 2003 17:33 CST
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*battle cry* KIYAAAAA!!! HOW DARE KAGOME'S DAD KILL HER MOM!!!!!!!! HE IS SO GONNA PAY!!!! kagome, u BETTER kill him for what he did 2 u! REVENGE!!!!! >:0 ohhhh when i get my hands on him why ill [scene missing] WHAT THE!??!?!?! THEY CUT OUT MY DEATH SCENE!!! OMG!
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Title: Hello
Reviewed By: Slywolf On: December 02, 2003 00:19 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey! good chapter again! Damn mm.org wont let me sign in to my account tho...kuso. but newayz, good chapter! I think that uh-is Naraku maybe her father or maybe the one that kiled Kagome's mother? hn. but this was a good chater! GLad yaupdated and i hope you do so again soon! -Lani
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Title: Hello
Reviewed By: Slywolf9 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2003 21:33 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Gah! i FINALLY found this fic again! i was crying b/c i forgot to save this fic as a fave, so i was all sad! Domo Arigato Gozaimasu (thank you very much) for telling me what WAFF meant!!! Good chapters! Sometimes Yash doesnt know what hes talking about...*sigh* Good job tho! Nose-Ring...cool name! lol...YOTH...GAH! i give up! cant figure it out...but-good job in the chapters! i hope your after school activities are going okay! Keep up the good work! -Lani
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Title: Dranged fanfic lover
Reviewed By: Debbie the rex On: November 23, 2003 18:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow me liky a loy please continue soon
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Reviewed By: chihiro-san [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2003 00:33 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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This is a wonderful story. The dialouge is intruiging and the plot is addicting. It is also quite funny. I must ask, however, that you please proof-read your paper. This is not a flame, but a suggestion. I know that you are very busy (and am personally amazed that you do so many things. Are you a pseudo-superman?)but it would be greatly appriciated. Love the story! Toodles!~chihiro-san
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