"Project Hope" Reviews/Comments [ 63 ] |
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Reviewed By: Sundragon [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2003 19:42 CDT Comment/Review: Great! I'm not a fan of dark fics but I think this is on fic that should go that route. I hope you update soon. Don't worry about people not reviewing. Some want to review at the end. |
Reviewed By: Yoraeryu (-not signed in because her comp sucks...) On: September 06, 2003 21:45 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: Well this is certaintly a different idea for an Inuyasha fic. Good choice, I must say. Very well-written, just a few quirks here and there but otherwise no major flaws.
I personally would have never thought of demons being ruled by humans, even with my psychotically evil mind. I think you should up the rating to R; it looks like this could be quite a dark fic with the right author. But... I'd like things to be upbeat... I totally go for fics with lots of WAFF in them. However, either angsty or fluffy, I'll still review for every chapter.
P.S.- Do you have a beta reader? I may be of some help if you don't. ^.^ E-mail me if you want to, ok? Ja ne. |
Reviewed By: debbie the rex On: September 06, 2003 12:51 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: soooooooooooooooooooo great update soon |
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