| "A Roses Thorn" Reviews/Comments [ 51 ] |
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Reviewed By: InuyashaLoverSoDealWithIt On: May 24, 2004 12:55 CDT
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Luv your San/Mir lemon. Plz write more in the future! ^__^
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Reviewed By: essie [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2004 20:12 CDT
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this is a great fanfic please update soon
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Reviewed By: Zelix [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2004 16:43 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic is so good... i just wish you'd update faster...
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Title: by the way
Reviewed By: Lone Vixen [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2004 13:31 CDT
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By the way, I thought those little convos between you and Inuyasha in the begining and end are funny and clever. I think it's good to add a bit of the author's humor like that. And so what if SOME people don't read them? They can just scroll down, it's not worth whining about...... Anyways, update soon!
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Title: Your awesome fic
Reviewed By: Lone Vixen [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2004 11:44 CDT
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Oh my gosh! I love this fic! Gr...but I had plans this morning but I was just checkin out the fics and when I started reading yours I couldn't stop! Now it's noon and I'm just frustrated that there isn't more to read! lol How come you haven't updated in a while? You're doing great with the story and best of all, I don't think anyone is out of character. You follow them really well. Plus the lemons are great! lol I can't wait to see what happens later on. I noticed you haven't updated in LONG time. I hope you haven't given up on this fic. You're such a talented and creative writer that there should be updates SOON! Seriously, you don't want a gang of angry readers coming at you. We can be quite vicious, ya know. lol Keep writing and good luck! Oh and by the way, don't listen to the bad things other MediaMiner people are saying about your fic. So long as you're just having a good time doing your own thing and others are enjoying it too then that's all that matters. MediaMiner isn't a big competition where people need to be judged by what they write. Just write however the hell you want to write because trust me, those of us who aren't a tightass about Mediaminer just being a place to put down your fun ideas will still read your fic. Sorry, that was a bit of a rant. Some stuck up mediaminer people just get on my nerves. Anyways, again, good luck! And update soon! -Lone Vixen-
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Reviewed By: Niffy [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2004 11:48 CDT
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Good story. Update soon!
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Reviewed By: RedHerring [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2004 11:22 CDT
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Besides that, they're all out of character. The whole 'conversation' thing at the beginning is really annoying and most people don't read it. And all the shouting you make your characters do make me wonder why they still have their voices.
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Title: Chapter 1
Reviewed By: RedHerring [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2004 11:16 CDT
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Can you get any more repetative? I mean, how many stories are there where it starts out with Kagome and Inuyasha fighting about her going home. Do you know how many times they actually did it in the manga, or the anime? Not that many times. I think a total of ten times. (Although I'm not positive about that. I know it was a small number) It is a popular fan fiction theme to have them argue about that. And its never original, it always goes the same, and it always ends the same way. It'd be better if you tried starting a different way.
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Reviewed By: essie [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2004 03:32 CDT
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this is an outstanding fanfic update soon
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Reviewed By: Dragons Pixie On: March 22, 2004 21:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was a really good story to read and i hope you can update real soon. I wanna know what happens!
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Reviewed By: Coku's Lover [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2004 15:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ooooo!! I love the lemon chapter. *blushes* Great story.
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Title: likey
Reviewed By: Kikyou_104 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2004 18:01 CST
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ithink this is a very kiwaii story yes i really like it the lemons were good too update soon
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Reviewed By: Orb [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2004 15:44 CST
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Ooooo this is a really good fic!! The biting over the heart was really cute. And an interesting change from the normal bite in the neck. I hope you are able to write more. I'm really looking forward to it. (and your lemon *blushes) PS!! I loved the name of the chapter. I laughed for like 5 mintues!
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Reviewed By: Orb [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2004 15:44 CST
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Ooooo this is a really good fic!! The biting over the heart was really cute. And an interesting change from the normal bite in the neck. I hope you are able to write more. I'm really looking forward to it. (and your lemon *blushes) PS!! I loved the name of the chapter. I laughed for like 5 mintues!
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Reviewed By: Horse_Gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2004 15:17 CST
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keep writing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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