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Title: Konnichiwa!
Reviewed By: Lady_Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2005 17:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Konnichiwa, Dijoubou? Onigai continue asap ONIGAIIII! Lady Kagome May kami bless you and all you hold dear...
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Reviewed By: bubbles-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2005 00:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, I'm at a loss for words...*thinks*...wait, no I'm not! This story is awesome! I started reading it and I was like LEMON TIME, YAY!!! And now it's like DRAMA and I'm gonna cry if I think is what is going to happen HAPPENS!!! Ack! NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!! OMG!!! I'm so sad now! Please update, you good storyteller you! Get me out of sad mode!!!
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Reviewed By: kagome15 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2005 17:56 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
love the story!! please update soon i want to kno what happens!!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: KawaiiJade [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2004 23:05 CST
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WHAT'S GOING TO HAPPEN NEXT!!! uPDATE SOON PLEASE!!!
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Reviewed By: Kaotu On: December 11, 2004 21:23 CST
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NOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!! KAGOME!!!!!!! BAD NARAKU BAD!!! I luvs your ficcy! I can't wait for the next chappie! Oh and Shippo said oneechan which means big sister. Did you mean okaasan which means mother or big sister?
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Reviewed By: just another reviewer On: December 08, 2004 00:39 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
why havent you updated in so long?...its not done is it?....
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Title: Poor Kag...
Reviewed By: Mic Mic [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2004 13:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That has got to hurt and now someone is after Kagome. This jsut can't be fun. I hope Naraku doesn't kill her pup... See Ya! ^_~ Mic Mic
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Reviewed By: Stumbles On: July 07, 2004 00:58 CDT
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You are doing great on the story. You are such a good writer, I cant wait for the next chapter. And thanks for the shout out!!! keep up on the story i'll be waiting.
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Reviewed By: RomanceLady On: July 06, 2004 05:17 CDT
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HELLO miss I'll-have-time-to-update-over-the-summer!!! *sigh* I just finished the boar chapter and... now I must wait?! *pout* But you did a good job! In a way... I hope Kagura gets rid of the unborn child because Inu Yasha and Kagome are still young and they need to be more active. A child will only get in the way, if you know what I mean. *wink wink* However, this is your story so anything will do. *thumbs up in approval*
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Reviewed By: RomanceLady On: July 06, 2004 04:51 CDT
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Oh... I just love all the personal comments from you. They're funny. Puts me in a good mood at this time of night. *bloodshot eyes* kidding! DemonKitty, you're an inspiration to me. Don't ask me how, just update!
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Reviewed By: RomanceLady On: July 06, 2004 04:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey! I just read a few beginning chapters. It's like... three in the morning and I'm laughing to myself because of your perverted comment on "size." HAHAHAHHAHAHA! okay I'll get over it. Besides, people will think I'm psychotic. I know my rates for you aren't perfect but what counts is that I'm still VERY interested in your fanfic. It's hard to find one that catches my attention. Good job, anywhoo.
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Reviewed By: milady On: June 22, 2004 07:13 CDT
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This is really good and I hope you update soon...
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Reviewed By: Goku's Lover [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2004 13:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm loving this story!! This is one of my favorite stories. Hope you update soon!
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Reviewed By: Lone Vixen [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2004 16:17 CDT
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Woo! Nice job! I'm SO looking forward to the next chapter. I don't know if you're getting swamped with homework again, because I know I am, but I hope you find time to update soon. I'm looking forward to it so good luck!!!
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Title: coments
Reviewed By: Kay C [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2004 18:02 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love this story and I'm onley on cappy one so good luck bye bye!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Kay C
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Reviewed By: Niffy [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2004 19:16 CDT
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AWWWWW *sniff sniff* great chapter. update soon
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Reviewed By: Halix On: June 08, 2004 16:31 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Rocking, simple as that, you rock dude!
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Reviewed By: essie [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2004 02:04 CDT
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this is a great fanfic please update soon
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Reviewed By: shedvl929(nli) On: June 07, 2004 18:34 CDT
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OMG! i LOVE this fic!!! it's awesome!! please update soon! i read all of the chapters in 1 mornings and i was only planning on reading the first chap. and coming back to it later. This is the best fic i've read in a LONG time. you have a great talent for balancing things out and keeping everyone in character. hope you have time to update soon! ~shedvl~ ^_-
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Reviewed By: shedvl929(nli) On: June 07, 2004 18:33 CDT
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OMG! i LOVE this fic!!! it's awesome!! please update soon! i read all of the chapters in a couple mornings and i was only planning on reading the first chap. and coming back to it later. This is the best fic i've read in a LONG time. you have a great talent for balancing things out and keeping everyone in character. hope you have time to update soon! ~shedvl~ ^_-
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Reviewed By: sh0rty [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2004 18:28 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
its a really really good fanfic!...update soon!!! :)
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Reviewed By: InuyashaLoverSoDealWithIt On: May 24, 2004 12:55 CDT
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Luv your San/Mir lemon. Plz write more in the future! ^__^
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Reviewed By: essie [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2004 20:12 CDT
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this is a great fanfic please update soon
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Reviewed By: Zelix [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2004 16:43 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic is so good... i just wish you'd update faster...
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Title: by the way
Reviewed By: Lone Vixen [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2004 13:31 CDT
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By the way, I thought those little convos between you and Inuyasha in the begining and end are funny and clever. I think it's good to add a bit of the author's humor like that. And so what if SOME people don't read them? They can just scroll down, it's not worth whining about...... Anyways, update soon!
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Title: Your awesome fic
Reviewed By: Lone Vixen [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2004 11:44 CDT
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Oh my gosh! I love this fic! Gr...but I had plans this morning but I was just checkin out the fics and when I started reading yours I couldn't stop! Now it's noon and I'm just frustrated that there isn't more to read! lol How come you haven't updated in a while? You're doing great with the story and best of all, I don't think anyone is out of character. You follow them really well. Plus the lemons are great! lol I can't wait to see what happens later on. I noticed you haven't updated in LONG time. I hope you haven't given up on this fic. You're such a talented and creative writer that there should be updates SOON! Seriously, you don't want a gang of angry readers coming at you. We can be quite vicious, ya know. lol Keep writing and good luck! Oh and by the way, don't listen to the bad things other MediaMiner people are saying about your fic. So long as you're just having a good time doing your own thing and others are enjoying it too then that's all that matters. MediaMiner isn't a big competition where people need to be judged by what they write. Just write however the hell you want to write because trust me, those of us who aren't a tightass about Mediaminer just being a place to put down your fun ideas will still read your fic. Sorry, that was a bit of a rant. Some stuck up mediaminer people just get on my nerves. Anyways, again, good luck! And update soon! -Lone Vixen-
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Reviewed By: Niffy [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2004 11:48 CDT
Comment/Review:
Good story. Update soon!
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Reviewed By: RedHerring [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2004 11:22 CDT
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Besides that, they're all out of character. The whole 'conversation' thing at the beginning is really annoying and most people don't read it. And all the shouting you make your characters do make me wonder why they still have their voices.
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Title: Chapter 1
Reviewed By: RedHerring [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2004 11:16 CDT
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Can you get any more repetative? I mean, how many stories are there where it starts out with Kagome and Inuyasha fighting about her going home. Do you know how many times they actually did it in the manga, or the anime? Not that many times. I think a total of ten times. (Although I'm not positive about that. I know it was a small number) It is a popular fan fiction theme to have them argue about that. And its never original, it always goes the same, and it always ends the same way. It'd be better if you tried starting a different way.
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Reviewed By: essie [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2004 03:32 CDT
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this is an outstanding fanfic update soon
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