| "The Power Of Desire" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: Descendant [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2003 00:24 CST
Comment/Review:
Very nice! Also, very cute and romantic.
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Reviewed By: Precious [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2003 13:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well it was good for a one shot. I thought Kagome was a little gushy and extermely bold at the same time. But like I said it's a one shot, can't afford to beat around the bush. I liked your ending sentence. It kinda summed everything up with a double meaning. An "eternity" literally from the well and an "eternity" is what it seems like considering their time together. Good story.
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Reviewed By: RavenShadow On: September 09, 2003 23:39 CDT
Comment/Review:
That was a really good fic. I love Inu and Kagome first time fic's. Nice job!!! |
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Reviewed By: Inu Nagi On: September 09, 2003 21:00 CDT
Comment/Review:
Nagi liked..ashamed there is only two comments :( but i guess two is worth a thousand to some :)....hmmm next time leave the parents home its always funnier/funner trying to figure out how to work around that lol..then of course therea always souta to distroy the moment (hint hint)
hai! wrote more! |
Reviewed By: Kohaku Hoshi [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2003 06:32 CDT
Comment/Review:
Good! write more. |
