| "Loneliness is not for me!" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Reviewed By: love_anime_91 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2005 04:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lesee.... if u dont want as many mistakes in which i find one in like every god damned sentence... im gonna copy the chapter.... fix it up... and then email it to u or somethin.... if tha's alright o' course.... im doin it anyway... i cant handle the fact tha' i havta fix it the mistakes in my head every single time... and i dont wanna use my brain at 5:48 in the god damned mornin wen i hav time to go online and then go to skool afterwards... nyway... im gonna fix ch.1-whatever many u hav right now asap... ill send it to u wen i finish... u may look it over... i doubt ill change much considerin i kno nothin bout gundam wing...(im so pathetic not to kno wat gundamn wing is about... TT^TT).... buh-bye for now...!! ^^... i wish u all the luck in the world for ur other fanficz... and do cont. ur descendents of darkness/yami no matsuei fanficz!!! ^^... im an obsessive yaoi fangirl...!! takes up majority of my day!! ^^ ~Dark~
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Reviewed By: fujinakaheero (not signed in) On: June 10, 2004 16:19 CDT
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Hey! I'm glad to see that you have written another chapter to this story after sooo very long ago. I really want you to update this story cause I think this story has a very good plot line and very good potential soo please keep up the good work and update please pretty please. So ya ne ways I guess I'll be waiting for your next chapter if u keep this story ALIVE!! Keep it alive I says, Alive! Alive! Alive!!! ^-^ =D Fujinakaheero (not signed in at the moment cause mediaminer is being gay! okay well JA NE!)
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Reviewed By: Princess2000204 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2004 16:11 CDT
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I really like this fic ^_^ If you're still looking for a beta reader, just e-mail me at MoonPrincess2097@bellsouth.net or you can AIM me at FrostMoon2097.
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Reviewed By: Devil1 On: October 06, 2003 22:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That's really good, I enjoy the sweet lemmon or lemonade. You did it. Congratulations.
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Reviewed By: Enna Namo [MediaMiner Member] On: October 05, 2003 11:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Are you going to reveal where Heero has been all that time? Or is Duo just dreaming? Didn't Heero rescue him at all and Duo died in that back allee? Your writing stile is very good. You portray Duo's POV very soulful.
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Reviewed By: anonymous weirdo On: October 04, 2003 13:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you are soooooooo good! I love this fic.... ok, so i like all your fics.... :gringrin: ... your grammar and spelling i can understand since you're swedish. and its not that hard to figure out what you mean to say, anyhow. :starts chanting while holding up heero and duo plushies: lemon lemon lemon lemon!!! XD XD i'm not a hentai... really.
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Reviewed By: leemax [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2003 15:25 CDT
Comment/Review:
please lllllllleeeeeeeeeeeeemmmmmmmmoooooooooooonnnnnn!
^_^ good writting keep it up. I can't wait for more. (on the edge of seat waiting) @_@ |
Title: good job
Reviewed By: Mashiro_Karasu [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2003 14:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
good fic...wish it hadnt let off there though...btw interested in a beta reader? if so i will volunteer. |
Reviewed By: IM_new_(^_^) On: September 08, 2003 20:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
helo..er..um..im just new hir and its my first time to revieew a story ..n_n;; demo.. wow ur story is good.. please write more and update soooon |
