| "The Trouble With Sports And Recreation" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Reviewed By: Yukisune On: May 01, 2004 16:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HA! Oh, that was soooo funny! Ya know, that's exactly why I don't play any sports. None! Nada! Goose eggs! My friends play softball and I wonder how they survive it. Just some useless information here, but yesterday my sister got mad at me and literally ATTACKED me! She jumped on top of me, scratched me, and PULLED MY HAIR!!!! Oh, She WILL die, and I will be the murderer...she is soooo evil. I guess that would explain Hiei being her favorite character. He is a BAD influence! No offence though! ^_^0
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Reviewed By: Neko_Ice_Queen[MediaMiner member] On: January 10, 2004 02:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic is too funny! The only thing I like more than Hiei getting hit upside the head with a baseball, is Kuwabaka getting hit updise the head with anything! Write soon!
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Reviewed By: Kitta On: December 14, 2003 17:30 CST
Comment/Review:
I like the story. Write another.
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Reviewed By: Hanami On: October 11, 2003 18:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! That was so funny! I laughed so hard I fell off my chair! I hate baseball, too. But you know what I hate more? Vollyball. I'm just no good. Arigato if you like it, but I do'nt. I think it would be funny to see Kurama have a tough time with that, even though I love him to pieces ^___~ Please continue!!!! This is eight, so, please count it as ten, though! I'm gonna check here every time I can! LMFAO! MORE! MORE!
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Title: Funny!
Reviewed By: LOVER-OF-HIEI [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2003 22:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA *falls off chair and gets back up* Ahem. I LOOOOOOOVE HIEI BUT THAT WAS GREAT! THAT WAS FUNNY FUNNY FUNNY YOU NEED TO WRITE MORE LIKE THAT! I just thought it needed more detail and needed to be longer, if it had those 2 things the overall ratingwould have been 10. Well, I LOVED IT!!!!! MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE! Write a sequel about Hiei getting ice cream, and then like he trips over a table or something and it all falls in his face! MAKE MORE TROUBLE FOR MY BELOVED HIEI! AHAHAHAHAHA "see, my love Hiei? See how much I love you? I love you so much that I want you to get in trouble and hurt yourself" *laughs manianicly* SHOO HIEI GO BE WITH YOUR BELOVED KURAMA AND EAT ICE CREAM TILL YOU DROP! GGGGGGGGGOOOOOOOOOOOOO SAKU-CHAN! *********Otaku~Hoshi
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Title: Shadow's #1 fan
Reviewed By: Kitsune 005 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2003 17:02 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was a great fanfic I really enjoyed it. I hate baseball too. Now I know someone else out there hates it. ^_^
Also I think you loath Hiei too for having him get hit in the head with two baseballs. |
Reviewed By: purplechaos04 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2003 19:19 CDT
Comment/Review:
Lol, that's wicked cute! Hiei versus the baseball! ^_^ |
Title: Karate Kitty
Reviewed By: Karate Kitty [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2003 14:59 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic is so funny. Please write another one like this.
Ciao,
Karate Kitty |
Reviewed By: Kirara_Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2003 14:08 CDT
Comment/Review:
OMG!!!!! that was so hilarious! it's so weird that hiei can dodge humans and demons of all kind, but he can't dodge a simple baseball! i think you should continue on this fic or write another one like it!!!! |
Reviewed By: Zdawg [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2003 10:49 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
unique, but funny! who'd ever thought that hiei would get beatened by a baseball?! lol!i love hiei and all, but getting beaten by a baseball is GREAT!! keep up the good work! |
Reviewed By: Jin's girl On: September 07, 2003 10:44 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this fic was funny, i can't stop laughing. you should do another one of this fics |
