| "All She Wants" Reviews/Comments [ 14 ] |
Reviewed By: Dark Moon Queen On: February 09, 2005 14:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
when are you going to finish
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Reviewed By: miststalker On: November 17, 2004 18:48 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
WHEE! more more more ooh what if they got done and after agreed to meet again? What if Schwarz has a mission and runs into the sailor scouts? Just some ideas
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Reviewed By: Aya21 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2004 03:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was terrific! Great creativity! Awesome job...I'm hoping that's not where you planned to stop however. I'll be looking forward to an update if there will be one. ~Aya
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Reviewed By: An Idiot On: August 30, 2004 22:46 CDT
Comment/Review:
That's it? You should continue this soon! I want to see how you have Crawford's vision come to pass! Usa is very good at what she's doing, so keep it up!
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Reviewed By: oych [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2004 03:56 CDT
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It was a nice read, but it lacks an actual plot. Where do you want to take this? Have you even read the reviews that you've gotten? Have you lost your muse? It will soon be almost one year since you published this story. Have you simply forgotten that you wrote something?
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Title: FINISH PLEASE!!!
Reviewed By: dm10 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2004 14:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love love LOVE this fic! It's really orig. Please finish it. I read it on ff.net and then after, I couldn't find it and I was SO PISSED! Now I did and it's not done. Please finish it.
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Reviewed By: stalkerofXellos On: June 03, 2004 14:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
why havnt you up dated i want to read and see who she has sex \w
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Reviewed By: Isis4422 On: March 28, 2004 23:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lust demon this is a great piece of work i love it i ope you fiish this and will usa fall in love farfello or crawford i wonder guess i'll just have to wait and see but please finish this i really want to see how usa and farfello's sex scene turn out
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Reviewed By: anime_on_the_moon On: February 08, 2004 12:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
just thought you may lik a tad info on farfie hes insain he like to do thing to make god sad or pissed did i mention he's a nut case and thats why i love him btw continu the story its amazing bogards babe recomended it to me so keepit up
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Reviewed By: me On: February 08, 2004 12:27 CST
Comment/Review:
if you dont update at least email me the next chap please moon_rose00@yahoo.com
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Reviewed By: girl_in_the_closet On: February 08, 2004 12:24 CST
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wow that was great and steamy keep it up. and who wil usa fall in love \w ...........hmmm i wonder (note my sarcasm)
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Reviewed By: Boggards_babe [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2003 01:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow i love it it is awsome to tell you the truth i've read it about 10 times no lie. i dont know why you havnt added yet but PLEASE add more i'm addicted i only gave you a 9 for enjoyment factor because YOU ONLY HAVE ONE CHAPPIE AND HOW CAN I ENJOY IT IF I DONT KNOW WHAT IS GONNA HAPPEN TO USA\REENE sorry for flipping there any way i have some sugestions usa falls in love \w farfarello and or crawford and momaru and usagi flippout when they see them togetther
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Reviewed By: anonynous On: December 22, 2003 21:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's quite good; fantastic, actually, in my opinion. It seems Usa has taken a liking to Farefello? (I know, its obvious) So, when are you getting to their sex scene? :)
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Reviewed By: ...2...g..r On: December 02, 2003 21:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow great it would be awesome if usa and farfarello fall in love and the rest of the scouts and exspecialy mamoru get pissed when they see the two together
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