| "Courtship" Reviews/Comments [ 347 ] |
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Reviewed By: Sakura Samora [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2006 15:44 EDT
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awwwwww i wanted to read some more, are you going to do a sequel?
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Reviewed By: BladesoftheValkyrie [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2006 05:36 EDT
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PS: When you speak of giving birth, it's "bearing" a child, not baring (which implies disrobing...). It's also "nape" of the neck, but it looked like you fixed that in the last chapter... ^_^
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Reviewed By: BladesoftheValkyrie [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2006 05:33 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a very good story, but I felt that the spelling and grammar mistakes greatly diminished its overall effect. Other than that, however, the plot and style of writing were very good and I am looking forward to reading the sequel.
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: bri_lady [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2006 19:47 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, this was an AMAZING fanfic. Probably the best one I've read! Certainly the longest ^^ It was tasteful and full of action, I had all I could do to put it down. I would LOVE to read the sequel if it's done or even in the process. ^^ I really loved it! ~Bri
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Title: hi there
Reviewed By: babydragon213 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2006 15:39 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ur story rocked will u be writing a sequel pretty soon? plz do it is so cute!!
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Reviewed By: blackartemis [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2006 22:02 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this chapter, well and the stoyr, but i thought i should comment on this chapter. I adore your syyle of writing, and anything else i gave 10's for, the 9 is just because this is a basic idea that is often used, thats not a bad thing and it definitely has a personal twist. The real reason for this review was your AN, i really appreciate that you stated your dislike of writing about rape and the seriousness of the subject. Luckily, i've never been through it, but others close to me have, and i appreciate the sensitivity. Anyways, Toodles!!
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Reviewed By: Cricket42 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2006 22:06 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this story!!! :D
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Reviewed By: OrlandoLover [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2006 15:05 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG OMG OMG OMG Awesome story......its amazingly unbelivable.....and i SERIOUSLY mean it....it was unbelivable.
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Reviewed By: kagome313 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2006 10:57 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved the story, but you really got to work on your grammer n spelling, n also need to work on the meanings of words that sound alike but spelt differently, like 'their' n 'there'. I really loved it, do keep up the good work and continue to write more fics
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Title: chapter 17
Reviewed By: Kichi [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2005 14:52 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this fic and I would have loved to hear Inu Yasha's ranting after Montaro's attempted rape of Kagome from someone else's perspective. I swear I could write a whole chapter on that scene alone!
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Reviewed By: battoasai [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2005 18:04 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very good fan fic, one of the few i actually finish reading lol, keep up the good work and make a sequel!
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Reviewed By: sedelia [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2005 01:13 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is so cute!!! It is definitely one of my favorites, thanks for writing it. :-)
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Title: constructive criticism
Reviewed By: Rachiru Tenou On: September 14, 2005 23:00 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 2 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm not intending this to be a flame at all. I hope I can offer some constructive criticism! You've definitely got an original story here. I was so excited when I read the summary! Oh so nifty! But unfortunately your story started to give me a headache somewhere into chapter three. Maybe I'm just being overly critical... being an English/Lit major... after all, it is just a fanfic. But I really think you could do more in the way of developing your sentences and working on your grammar. Now, I'm not saying it's terrible. You're a fairly decent writer. But someone who can't tell the difference between accept and except (for example)... you should try to work on that. Expand your vocabulary... read a dictionary or a thesaurus. And I mean this all in the nicest way! I really do think you have talent as a writer. You just need to refine it... so it won't give overly analyzing people like me a headache. LOL :P Best of luck to you in your future stories. And I hope you keep writing!
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Reviewed By: dreamy eyed On: August 29, 2005 03:29 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
::teary eyed:: I-I LOVE THIS STORY!!! AWESOMENESS!
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Reviewed By: dreamy eyed On: August 29, 2005 02:12 EDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
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...you're grammer and spelling are pretty bad, but i love this story!!! so cute!
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