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Reviewed By: dreamy eyed On: August 29, 2005 01:01 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
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so cute! i love the rin thing, he lets her sit on his lap! how cute!
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Reviewed By: Drake Clawfang On: August 06, 2005 23:23 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awesome story. I love it, it's an original take on Inu/Kags. I have an idea for a sequal. Montaro is struggling along on the road a few days after his banishment. to cut to the chase, he starts to die, then does the Onigumo-Naraku thing and becomes hanyou. Not really original, but I think a sequal would be cool.
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Reviewed By: kane shi megami [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2005 23:08 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY! I'm your 300th reviewer and I have to say this story was great! Loved it, and if you would like to write a sequel I wouldn't object! :)
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Title: plz
Reviewed By: InuandKagsforev13 On: July 20, 2005 04:51 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
U DID SHUCH A GOOD JOB!!! can't wait til the sequle!! well update as soon as u can about the new chapter in inuyash and the rest of the gang's life!! hopefuly, kagome and inuyasha will have a baby soon!!! if they do, name it Kyasha!?! its pronouced as, key-ya-sha ok?!? well good luck!! o wait u don't need it, u r a naturale!! well ttyl bye!! -InuandKagsforev13
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Reviewed By: Inuyasha luvr On: July 01, 2005 13:17 EDT
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Great story. It was so beautiful.Your a wonderful writer.
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Reviewed By: cherrystrawberry On: June 20, 2005 01:57 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I enjoyed the story very much.
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Reviewed By: Freefallin525 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2005 01:49 EDT
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Hi. I just started reading this story, and it's very good, but I can't help but notice that there are quite a few small errors here and there. If you want, I would be more than happy to do some editing for you. If you want me to, drop me and email. My email address is: faerie223@hotmail.com. :)
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Reviewed By: ttaybot313 On: May 02, 2005 20:56 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
luv the fanfic!it's one of the best fics i;ve ever read!i just don't think you gave montaro enough punishment 4 what he did to kagome!!O_o
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Reviewed By: dreamy7_12 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2005 19:47 EST
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This is one of the best fics I've ever read!!!!! You rock!!!! ^^ Loved the lemons by the way. were those seriously your first ones? Dude, you got some major skills. Great job on this fic. If I could have I would have given you 100000000000000000000000 for the Enjoyment factor and the overall rating... BUT PLZ PLZ PLZ UPDATE SOON U HAVE TO FINISH IT OR WRITE SOME MORE IT IS AN AWSOME FIC...PLZ UPDATE ASAP
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Title: Omg.
Reviewed By: Angelique220 On: March 07, 2005 10:59 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I give you complete TENS across the board! That was so sad..and romanic..and wonderful..wow..it felt so real too. >_>;; Lol. Keep up the good work! You should make a part two of this story, i'd be first to read it. Lol. Good job!
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Reviewed By: sexychicklet17*logged out* On: February 13, 2005 00:14 EST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow wow wow wow that was really good! it was really discritpive and creative and it had a lot of elaborate words. this one was definetly a new plot for me. a few constuctive comments: work on your spelling and sometimes you forgot periods and stuff. when you said that inuyasha would know when kagome was fertile i think you meant that she would be on her period...but you can get pregnant anytime even when you're not on it...just thought you oughtta know. also, a lot of the time you were kinda going on about nothing...i guess you meant those to just be fillers or something but if i were you i'd add in an adventure or something like that...but hey its all good! i think that montaro was a good invention and i liked the names that you chose..we all cheat sometimes but thats all right! the storyline was so sweet!! yea so, good job! and im really excited for the sequel i bet its gonna be awesome! you are an awesome writer and you need to keep writing!! you should write a book or something with the amount of talent you have! good job!
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Reviewed By: damn On: February 12, 2005 12:09 EST
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damn, what does kagome think this is, a popcorn movie!? what a freak
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Reviewed By: InusGirlD [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2005 11:50 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fanfic was one of the best I've read! I really enjoyed it, especially the lemons :P
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Reviewed By: Inu_RebelBabe07 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2005 18:19 EST
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I loved it. It was so sweet. It made my heart ache. I loved the ending and it let us think of what is next. Beautiful how you made Kagome find out that she is in his heart and not Kikyo.
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Title: HOLY CRAP!!!
Reviewed By: Kaiya-mikohanyou25 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2005 21:00 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOLLLLLLLLLLLLYYYYYYYYY CRRRR444RRAAAAAAAAPPPPPPP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! This is one of the best fics I've ever read!!!!! You rock!!!! ^^ Loved the lemons by the way. were those seriously your first ones? Dude, you got some major skills. Great job on this fic. If I could have I would have given you 100000000000000000000000 for the Enjoyment factor and the overall rating... *sniff* but it only goes to 10!!! WAAAAAHHHHHH!!!!! heh sorry bout that... anyway this is by far one of the best fics I've EVER read and I really hope you do a sequel. Could be about Kag and Inu's first kid, when they get to the present and see Kag's family, hell even a side story about Taka would be read and reviewed 500 times in three seconds flat. But anyway, I hope you keep up the AWESOME work in all your writing, and I hope you continue with it because, quite frankly, I think your pretty much the closest I'll ever find to the best author on this site!!!!!! Oh! And check out my fic too please! If someone of your writing abilities reads it and likes it I'll really be at ease. It's a mix of Kag leaving the group and comming back with more additude (but still the kag we secretly want to strangle and take her place)and Kag becomming a hanyou. Oh and there's Kikyo and slight Kouga bashing though... Argh... I just advertized my own fic In a review..... -_-0 I'm ashamed of myself now...... Oh well..... Figures my Backspace key is jammed..... Argh... Oh well anyway great fic I loved it! Later! Kaiya
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