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Title: Courtship
Reviewed By: Riachu [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2003 20:07 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very well done. I've read many fan fics where they drag out the story and keep from going to the "bed" scenes, and this is one of the better ones. I like the kind of romance that the story is dragged on, because as someone else said,"...you get to know the characters better..." I totaly agree with that preson. For some reason, the romance genre has really sparked my interst. Keep going, and I'll check in every once and a while to see if there is another chapter to read, and if you didn't get my message, then the "sleeping clothes" as you put it are called yukatas. Sayonara.
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Reviewed By: PJ On: October 02, 2003 16:47 EDT
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I just wanted to say that I am really enjoying thi story and look forward to your updates. This is a very interesting story for me anyways and very original. I like that you are going through the whole courtship stuff and not just having them 'jump in the bed' while I like smut as much and the next person I like a nice romance better it gives the reader time to get to know the characters, etc. Keep up the good work. I did want to ask if you will be addressing Inuyasha and Shippou talking or anything I am sure Shippou feels like he may have let Inuyasha down for not being able to protect Kagome. Just wondering keep writing can't wait for the next update.
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Reviewed By: Priestess Kylie-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2003 16:24 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please Please Please update!!!! I want to know what happens next...UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!! THIS STORY IS UNDER MY FAVS
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Reviewed By: RavenShadow [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2003 00:35 EDT
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This is such a great story! I love the way it is developing. I can not wait to see what happens next. Please update soon!!!
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Title: where are the new chapters????
Reviewed By: originalNekoYasha [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2003 23:26 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!!!!!! it's been too long since any new chaps have been added, please write more! the story's too good to leave it in stalemate. pretty please???!!
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Title: Awesome
Reviewed By: MKyrissaean [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2003 12:58 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The story is great, I LOVE it, though you have some inconsistencies in grammar, sometimes referring to the wrong character in a scene. There are also some basic grammatical errors, but other than that, it's a great story. Please write more!
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Title: lissaBlackCatEarslissa
Reviewed By: lissaBlackCatEarslissa [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2003 21:11 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
needs more but so far great `
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Reviewed By: gigi-chan On: September 30, 2003 00:28 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hi there... started reading your story today and kept on reading. it's such a cute/romantic story. hope to read the next chapter soon... laters!
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Reviewed By: NightChild01 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2003 16:37 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a very good story and I like it a lot. Grammar needs some work, there's some typos and the such in it...perhaps you need to find a beta-reader? Anyway, I really do like this story, keep up the great work. ~ NC01
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Title: Kissi21
Reviewed By: Kissi21 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2003 14:45 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Is Kagome ever going to tell Inu how she really feels? I love this story it is great. Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: IotaTheSweet [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2003 18:43 EDT
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OH SHIT!!! COME ON IT WAS GETTING SO GOOD TO, PLEAE UPDATE SOOOON!!! OR I WILL SEND ALL MY MINNIONS AFTER YOU!!!!!!!!1 ~~Jinxie-chan~~
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Reviewed By: bebe jinx On: September 27, 2003 13:37 EDT
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I've really enjoyed your story so far. And i know this is supposesed to be NC17 but no rush to get to the sex. I think it's really sweet the way youre writing them and their situation. I can't wait for more. Although there are many typos ...not enough to annoy me though. Keep them going as slow as you want. the story i'm writing is on ch16 and still has no lemon in sight. who said a lemon fic had to have a lemon asap??
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Reviewed By: Koi1 On: September 27, 2003 10:27 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow I love ur fanfic its really good so far I'm such a hentai but i cant wait for the lemon well anyways keep writing thanks!!
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Reviewed By: Blackberry [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2003 00:03 EDT
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I'm really enjoying this story. I like your writing style and your characterizations. However, there are a lot of typos (not the kind that'll get caught by spellchecker, unfortunately), like "sweat" when you obviously mean "sweet". I look forward to more chapters from you!
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Reviewed By: luvzdogz On: September 26, 2003 21:33 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
UPDATE THIS WONDERFUL STORY ALREADY
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