| "Courtship" Reviews/Comments [ 347 ] |
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Reviewed By: Angel452 On: September 26, 2003 11:01 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter. Is Kagome ever going to ask him about his feelings or will he find out from Sango or Miroku? Please update as soon as possible.
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Title: sweet torture
Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2003 08:40 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have this feeling you want us to earn our lemon...you tease you...I bet you get some kinda of pleasure from making all the hentai's out there wade through a plot to get to the lemon...Ku Ku Ku very nice I hope you'll be able to get the next chapter out soon *and if you didn't guess all things were said in jest*
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Title: so close...
Reviewed By: ladyofthedragons1984 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2003 03:55 EDT
Comment/Review:
soo close and yet soo far from lemony goodness (::repeats to herself:: i am not a hentai i am not a hentai i am not a hentai...) update soon
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Reviewed By: RavenShadow [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2003 00:04 EDT
Comment/Review:
Oh, please update soon I need to know what is going to happen next! I love this story!!!
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Reviewed By: Zona On: September 21, 2003 10:42 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very cute. Inuyasha is pretty clueless. Please update as soon as you can! |
Title: UPDATE!!!
Reviewed By: Nekoyasha01 On: September 19, 2003 19:03 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
fabulous! its too sweet! :) please keep those new chaps coming, the story's gettin really really interesting now. So please..UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!! |
Title: ...
Reviewed By: Fuyumiko [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2003 18:21 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have to admit this fic is really good, I don't read these type often; mainly the kind were InuYasha is being...well InuYasha, but hey a change is good once in a while, ne? Keep writing and please update as soon as you can. Arigato,
Souyro Fuyumiko |
Reviewed By: MommyRogers [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2003 00:55 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am thoroughly enjoying this - please do continue! |
Title: I beg you longer chapters please
Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2003 08:24 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it so far but I'm a reader and I love long chapters *I love really long storys even better* I hope you next chapter comes out soon yukata is the name of the sleeping robe I think I may be wrong though...or I might be right and spelled it wrong ;) I'm such a dork |
Reviewed By: ME On: September 15, 2003 20:15 EDT
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Okay! got all the good setup going now I can't wait for all the fun stuff b/w Inu-Kag to begin^_~ sounds like it'll get juicy...... --update when you can!! hopefully soon but...... |
Reviewed By: RavenShadow [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2003 12:32 EDT
Comment/Review:
This is such a good story. I hope InuYasha takes the advice and run with it. I can not wait to see Kagoeme's reaction. Please update soon!!! |
Reviewed By: notzathros On: September 14, 2003 12:28 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOVE IT!!! Please keep writing.
THANKS! |
Reviewed By: krnjulia On: September 14, 2003 11:46 EDT
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hi! wow this fic is really good! its funny how Inu Yasha is trying so hard for Kagome!! and Inu is a very naughty boy... hehe~ anyways update soon! |
Reviewed By: Nick F. On: September 13, 2003 11:19 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful!
Update soon! |
Reviewed By: SleepySango [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2003 00:30 EDT
Comment/Review:
you have a problem with your ku's and ko's, don't you? It's Naraku (literally, "void." Uses the same kanji, too), Mikoku, Kohaku, etc. Ko is a suffix found only on girls' names, such as Yuriko or Aiko or Rumiko. Ko means "child." Naraku is not the feminine child of Nara (whatever you take Nara to mean). Please edit and correct this... it really interferes with reading your story, because I can't get over the way the names are butchered. Almost like how I can't get over how they kill the names (and characters) in the English dub...
Sorry to sound harsh, but this is constructive criticism, and will be much more useful than someone demanding updates or offering mindless praises. |
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