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Reviewed By: black beauty On: September 12, 2003 20:52 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. Originally I thought this fic was going to be something like NCS and I was hesitant to read it. I'm just glad that I read the reviews which game me enough fuel to keep on reading when I wasn't sure if I was going to like it. I just have to say that I'm liking this fic and I can't wait for the next installment. Keep up the *GREAT* job. |
Reviewed By: Kae (aka moonraven) On: September 12, 2003 00:58 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOL. Good For Heero! I really enjoyed that. I don't know why but I was holding my breath in places while I was reading...that sure adds to the sense of danger.
Really an enjoyable read, thank you.
As for the lemon, the story is actually very good the way it is though the hentai in me is dying for you to add some citrus to this! LOL. Your call but I think it's just perfect!
And thank you also for your comments on The Silent Series. You're right, Relena is not an easy character to write. ^_^ But I giving it my best!
Huggles! |
Reviewed By: MelizaMac [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2003 21:14 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Add me to the list of those that were fooled.
I love your writing style - very descriptive, great grammar, good balance of tension and humor. I think you did a wonderful job of profiling the "eccentricities" of the pilots' personalities.
GW isn't the easiest anime to write fanfics for, IMHO. Congratulations on your success, and thanks for providing us with a quality read! |
Reviewed By: Lael On: September 09, 2003 20:42 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome!! Fooled me too. Maybe instead of a lemon, what happens after that night? I don't know, I'm not a writer. Just an idea. |
Reviewed By: Aoede On: September 09, 2003 16:30 EDT
Comment/Review:
hahahaha!!! OMG! he fooled ME, that's for sure! hahhaha... X_x that was good, really. i liked this. As for the lemon... well... i like the story just like this, leaves more to the imagination in my opinion =^_^= |
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