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Reviewed By: Momma Cat [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2003 00:24 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Its not often when someone writes a story and I'm really needing them to do a lemon with it... but you just destroy me in that area. You give the set-up, you make the mood and end the fic. I know I'm harassing you in this, alot, but take it as a compliment. You got me wanting really bad. ^_^
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Reviewed By: Devil1 On: October 20, 2003 23:49 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
Sweet.
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Reviewed By: Maxwells Demon [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2003 21:28 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Heero definitely fooled me and I panicked along with Duo! I loved the entire work. Great work with the POV stuff and character development. I really enjoyed your use of description when it came to the lemony part. I like 'em better when there is more left up to the reader's imagination. Please, if inspiration strikes again, write more!
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Reviewed By: black beauty On: October 20, 2003 20:07 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Great, now that Heero finally shows that there is more to him than meets the eye the fic is over. Well not so much over, but sort of droped. But hey, I can't complain as far as having the G Boys in character goes, this chapter was fluff. And I love fluff. That's why I always want to read your fics. Keep up the great job.
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Reviewed By: black beauty On: October 16, 2003 19:02 EDT
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Sighs in relief. That was a tense chapter. Do you love making Dou suffer and in turn your readers too. The next chapter better be all fluff! Dou deserves it and after putting up with the last chapter, I think the readers do too. Update soon and keep it up.
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Reviewed By: black beauty On: October 14, 2003 21:34 EDT
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I really this fic. Keep up the good job.
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Title: Momma Cat
Reviewed By: Momma Cat [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2003 01:46 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
This is a damn decent story. Love the Wuffers! =)
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Reviewed By: mim On: September 19, 2003 15:16 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
funny, i liked the living crossword puzzle. |
Reviewed By: sapphire On: September 18, 2003 20:49 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
this was very clever - i really enjoyed this 'one shot' and look forward to ~~Heero's side |
Reviewed By: black beauty On: September 12, 2003 20:52 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. Originally I thought this fic was going to be something like NCS and I was hesitant to read it. I'm just glad that I read the reviews which game me enough fuel to keep on reading when I wasn't sure if I was going to like it. I just have to say that I'm liking this fic and I can't wait for the next installment. Keep up the *GREAT* job. |
Reviewed By: Kae (aka moonraven) On: September 12, 2003 00:58 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOL. Good For Heero! I really enjoyed that. I don't know why but I was holding my breath in places while I was reading...that sure adds to the sense of danger.
Really an enjoyable read, thank you.
As for the lemon, the story is actually very good the way it is though the hentai in me is dying for you to add some citrus to this! LOL. Your call but I think it's just perfect!
And thank you also for your comments on The Silent Series. You're right, Relena is not an easy character to write. ^_^ But I giving it my best!
Huggles! |
Reviewed By: MelizaMac [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2003 21:14 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Add me to the list of those that were fooled.
I love your writing style - very descriptive, great grammar, good balance of tension and humor. I think you did a wonderful job of profiling the "eccentricities" of the pilots' personalities.
GW isn't the easiest anime to write fanfics for, IMHO. Congratulations on your success, and thanks for providing us with a quality read! |
Reviewed By: Lael On: September 09, 2003 20:42 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome!! Fooled me too. Maybe instead of a lemon, what happens after that night? I don't know, I'm not a writer. Just an idea. |
Reviewed By: Aoede On: September 09, 2003 16:30 EDT
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hahahaha!!! OMG! he fooled ME, that's for sure! hahhaha... X_x that was good, really. i liked this. As for the lemon... well... i like the story just like this, leaves more to the imagination in my opinion =^_^= |
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