| "A Suitable Bride" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Reviewed By: Jinsei On: August 13, 2004 20:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Heeh... >.>;;;; I'm actually Jinsei Seishin on MM... I'm just too darn lazy to log in... >.>;;;; And first time I reviewed A Suitable Bride I didn't yet have an account. Anyway! I've read your whole story and I still hold to that it's a perfect story because of how I can feel the feelings in it. And I love the part with her wish and Nadil. ^.^;;;;; *might be because she likes the youkai Lord and roleplays him in some RPGs* ^.^;;;;;;;;;;;;;;; Anyway. You're really right. It's a possible way to look at it. And maybe I over-rate your fic but I really like this one. ^^=
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Reviewed By: Mill On: August 11, 2004 18:55 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hey! GRRRREAT ending! I love it! I wanna re-read book two now though becasue it was so exciting!
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Reviewed By: DemonandGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2004 18:31 CDT
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Yes, the last chapter definitely clears everything up. I really don't think there's anything else I can say... everything seemed great.^-^ I think I'll go get my 2nd book now.
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Reviewed By: DemonandGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2004 22:36 CDT
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Thank you for updating. ^-^ That makes me very happy. Use the Dragon eyes to get Lord Lykouleon to make love to her? Interesting... Please update as soon as you can!
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Reviewed By: DemonandGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2004 00:27 CST
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Wow. I loved Kai-sterns entrance. Please continue! When is Raseleane going to be able to speak her mind? When are they going to fall in love? I need to know!
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Title: Lady
Reviewed By: Jinsei On: December 27, 2003 21:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a really good one... But all the time I really wanted her to just speak her thoughts. I feel so sorry for Raseleane. But being able to write like that, to be able to capture the reader like that... That's proffesional. I loved it and can't wait for the final chapter! YOu've really captured the personalities good!
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Reviewed By: M.M (again) On: December 22, 2003 15:38 CST
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I love this! Kai-Stern's entrance into the fic was great and funny! You should really continue with a sequel about Rasleane's POV and how she falls in love with him and all.
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Reviewed By: M.M. On: December 17, 2003 15:59 CST
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This is good! I love how you have Raseleane have her own mind with htis whole sitiuation. Continue. -Millenia (author of Genkai's Angel)
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