| "More Than Memories" Reviews/Comments [ 14 ] |
Reviewed By: Sarah aka Vega [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2008 14:04 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, how well done! I can totally see her doing this, I mean, the uncertainty would have also be eating me alive and a chance like that... it wouldn't come along very often, would it?
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Reviewed By: LZ566 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2006 17:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Are you ever going to update this? Because if you don't, I may cry.
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Reviewed By: Vegetas Lover On: April 28, 2005 17:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this fic is so mcuh different from the others ive read. ive never read a mirai bulma fic before so i was really interested. when i read your first chapter i was so hooked. ive often wondered why she didnt go to the present/past herself. and you know, maybe she did! i wanna know whats gonna happen to her in the present timeline and if she'll meet vegeta and conversate with him and stuff like that. well i hope you're still thinking about continuing this fic. its really different and really good. i hope you get the time to make another chapter soon. i really wanna read more of this. Thanks. later.
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Reviewed By: vegetakitten [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2005 20:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is very well written and enjoyable. I hope you will continue soon.
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Title: humble request
Reviewed By: debbiechan [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2004 19:47 CDT
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I love Mirai Bulma. I love how in the anime she seems fuller-bodied, less coiffed than the other B. Yet she's still that bubbly blue eyed girl from the old DB. I wonder endlessly about her. There's a story here only you can tell. Please--**best Oliver Twist pathetic look** more please? debbiechan
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Reviewed By: LisaB(not logged in) On: November 17, 2003 15:13 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this idea. . . I've always wondered why M. Bulma didnt' make the trip herself. Please update when you can. I can tell this is going to be wonderful.
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Reviewed By: nona On: November 08, 2003 15:24 CST
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Great start! U updating this right? Please???
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Reviewed By: geminiprincess On: September 18, 2003 01:25 CDT
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Wow. What an original idea for a story. Bulma...only inventing the time machine for her own selfish purposes? This should be interesting. Can't wait for the next chapter. ~Gail~ |
Title: ch.1
Reviewed By: Library Surfer On: September 13, 2003 00:34 CDT
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My favorite part is the last few sentences of Bulma's rememberances...(how he spoke w/ passion...and while she honors his fighting prowess, it's his mind that she remembers most etc.) just before Trunks 'smiles in contentment'...This is exactly how I have always thought of Vegeta...and you put it so beautifully ^_^. |
Reviewed By: christabeleve61 On: September 10, 2003 10:36 CDT
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WOW, I could feel her pain,her resolve,her sadness, wonderful. |
Title: Wow...
Reviewed By: Pareathe [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2003 22:18 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Have I ever told you how much I love your damned overactive muses? ^_^
This was...wonderful. My heart was just breaking for Bulma, because you know that kind of situation where you had someone but you never knew exactly where you stood, and when it ends it just eats you alive. It's the worst kind of "What If?" syndrome, and you conveyed the emotions surrounding it beautifully. And the first person perspective works. Damn, it works unbelievably well for a piece like this one.
Okay, I know where where you post and the MLs you hang out on, so you better get an update cranking or it's the Chichi-fied bitch bat and Tasuki's SPORK FROM HELL for you! Bwahahahaha! |
Reviewed By: anony On: September 09, 2003 21:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Woohoo! The start of another good B/V fic! I had always pondered why Mirai Bulma didn't choose to return to the past herself ... or perhaps she did but no one in the Z gang noticed? So thanx for exploring this interesting scenario : ) So what's she really up to? |
Reviewed By: Meliza On: September 09, 2003 20:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I could feel the butterflies churning around in my stomach as Bulma worried over her decision and subsequent activities. It broke my heart knowing that she was upset about lying to Trunks and leaving him. And then thinking about what she was going back to...
I swear, if I had read this right after lunch, I wouldn't have kept anything down, just because I felt so nervous!
I anticipate another well-written angst-filled fic, Ember-chan. I don't know how you do it...
But I'm sure glad you do! ^-^ |
Reviewed By: Phantomscribe On: September 09, 2003 19:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, Ember, that was beautiful! I wanted to cry my eyes out. Everytime I think there is no way your writing can get better you suprise me with something like this! I loved it! Thank you from an adoring fan! |
