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Reviewed By: Ish On: March 23, 2004 01:42 CST
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Wow - just read this. Going be another sleepless night for me looks like! But -oh - so wonderful! I hope so much that you do continue it. There needs to be more R/T in the world!
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Title: Blue Sea Blue Sky
Reviewed By: sakura petals On: January 13, 2004 18:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WAHH! This story is GREAT!I'm already interested in it and I just barely started reading it.GOSH!I CAN'T WAIT TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!
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Title: Sorry For My Delay In Reviewing
Reviewed By: KittyLoire91800 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2004 04:34 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is by far one of the best Gravitation fics I have read. It really draws me in and I don't want to stop reading it. I'm a sucker for the really long (What I call epic) fanfics. And I love Tatsuha's comments. At times they sound like things I would say. And the "Flying to Tahiti" thing has creeped its way into my speech. I'm really looking forward to any following chapters. I know I must be patient because these things take time. (But I don't have to like it. LOL) ~K=^._.^=
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Reviewed By: dbzobsessed [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2003 22:00 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I hope you haven't stopped writing this fic. I have really enjoyed it and hope you continue it soon.
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Title: On the Outside
Reviewed By: *^ ^* On: October 19, 2003 22:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent. Good job on all of the fic, really. Tatsuha's personality actually fits. And amazingly! It's a fic about him! That's good! And everyone else is portrayed correctly for once, as well (no raving/abusive Yukis or super-depressed Shuichis..at least, that's how they are in angst fics). Anyhoo, great job on all aspects. I like it a lot, and I can't wait to read more. Good job. *claps*
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Reviewed By: eep! On: October 16, 2003 01:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*glomp* eep! I'm totally obsessed with this fic! I've been reading the whole thing instead of doing my homework, but thats okay, cuz it's totally brill!
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Title: chapter 10
Reviewed By: dbzobsessed [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2003 21:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've tried to review twice and had problems so I hope this one works. Sorry I didn't review more chapters. This is a awesome fic, the best Gravitation I've read, most I start don't hold my interest long, but this one is wonderful. I love your writing style from Tatsuha's POV, with all his thoughts, it's like your inside him mind. I love the way Ryuuichi seems to keep showing up and the development of the friendship between the two of them. I know this is centered on Tatsuha/Ryuuichi, but I really enjoyed the part with Yuki and Shuichi when Shuichi feel asleep in the hallway waiting from him to come out of his study. You have captured the characterizations from the series so well. I hope you can add just a few more scenes like that one in. You left a great cliff hanger. I hope you can update sometime soon so we can find out if Tatsuha has to go back home and when he will get to see Ryuuichi again, I know he has to, it can't end like that. Anyway, thanks for sharing.
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Reviewed By: RoamingLake [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2003 14:55 CDT
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this has got to be the best Gravi fic i have read! you had me cracking up, and unable to read the story fast enough to find out what happens next! *long sigh* i hope you are able to write tons more in super fast mode ^_~
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Title: ch 2
Reviewed By: dbzobsessed [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2003 01:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have to say this was recommended by MelizaMac and I have to thank her because this is an awesome fic. I haven't read too many Gravitation fics because I haven't found many that will hold my interest. Yours definitely does. I love it from Tatsuha's POV and so far you have captured the feel of the series. I will finish what you have written soon, so I hope by the time I do you have another post. I want to also thank you for sharing such a truly enjoyable fic.
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Title: Precious!
Reviewed By: MelizaMac [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2003 21:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I almost didn't read this fic at first, simply because I thought it would be another typical "Ryuuichi the Simple" genre. Jeez, I'm so glad that I didn't listen to my first instincts! You've done a beautiful job of portraying Tatsuha as he struggles with his feelings for Ryuuchi, his frustration with family "secrets," and his concern for Yuki. The interaction between Yuki and Shuichi is what I'd expect from their relationship by this time. I like how you throw in those special moments between them. And oh, how I luurrrrvve how you've written Ryu-chan!! While keeping the wide-eyed innocent that we all adore (at least I do,) you've brought out the intellect that must be hidden behind Kumagorou. This is a well-written, creative, totally addictive piece of work, kiddo! I sure hope you have the ending planned, because I'd really hate to see a story of this quality fade away without being seen through to the end.
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Title: GAAAH!
Reviewed By: shake_it_buddy On: October 01, 2003 09:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic is awsome! This is the first fic I've enjoyed reading for quite a while, you're fabulous! ^____^ Please continue before I die of lack-of-chapter-9!
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Reviewed By: Akot On: September 29, 2003 19:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very, very fun story. Your characterizations are great, and its nice to see some detail added Tatsuha, and some of the other more minor characters, especially Ryuuichi. I love that you've given him a real brain in there: most people tend to write him at face value. It's nice to see some really good Gravi fic, and please be warned that I may pull a K on you if you don't actually finish this...
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Reviewed By: Youkai Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2003 08:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story! No words can begin to do justice to this story because it is above and beyond anything that I have read in a long time. I am a total Tatsuha/Ryuuichi fan, and I love the favt that this sotry is written from Tatsuha's POV. Please update ASAP because I want to know what is going to happen next. There are no suggestions that I can make because this story is perfect, and needs no corrections.
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Title: love the story
Reviewed By: z On: September 19, 2003 19:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE this story!!!! It's the best Ryuichi Tatsuha fic out there! When are you gonna update? SOON SOON SOON!!!! |
Title: On the Outside
Reviewed By: Blaine On: September 12, 2003 12:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think this is an absolutely fantastic fic. It's the best gravitation fic I've read for a loooong time, and I've been reading for them for an incredible amount of time.
I love the first person of tatsuha. The 'brooding' average teenager you've portrayed his is no less than brilliant. Most people just make him a crazed fan boy .. which he is, but nothing else. Where as here, he has substance as well as the crazed fanboyness. I love it. =) everyone elses character is really on the money too. Shuuichi and Yuki are adorable. Mika is great! Please keep goin with this. I'll loyally follow this story. |
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