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Reviewed By: SWOTBWOT [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2005 11:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is an absolute classic. One of the very best Tat/Ryu stories, and one of my all time favorites.
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Reviewed By: MelizaMac [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2004 23:30 CDT
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Hey Kiddo, I see that we're coming up on one year since your last update. I sure hope you haven't given up on this fic; it's one of the best Gravi fics I've ever run across. I hope your muse will inspire you, and soon!
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Reviewed By: Youkai Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2004 23:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please, Please, Please update this fic! I really want to find out what is going to happen, and right now I am on pins and needles waiting for an update. Keep up the good work, and please update soon.
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Title: when's the next installment?
Reviewed By: dib On: June 19, 2004 10:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
tatsuha's fun especially when you made him so holden-caulfield-ish... still waiting for yer next installment. i would hope you havent trashed this fic yet, there arent many great tatryu fics outhere.
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Reviewed By: Neus On: April 30, 2004 12:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, I loved the fic!! It´s really interesting to read it in Tatsuha POV, he is so funny and sarchastic! After all, he is only 16. And I like how you portrayed Ryuuichy, specially his relation with Tatsuha. Hell, I liked everybody ( but above all Shuuichi and Yuki )! ^_^ So please, please, write more soon ( snif )
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Reviewed By: Ish On: March 23, 2004 01:42 CST
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Wow - just read this. Going be another sleepless night for me looks like! But -oh - so wonderful! I hope so much that you do continue it. There needs to be more R/T in the world!
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Title: Blue Sea Blue Sky
Reviewed By: sakura petals On: January 13, 2004 18:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WAHH! This story is GREAT!I'm already interested in it and I just barely started reading it.GOSH!I CAN'T WAIT TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!
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Title: Sorry For My Delay In Reviewing
Reviewed By: KittyLoire91800 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2004 04:34 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is by far one of the best Gravitation fics I have read. It really draws me in and I don't want to stop reading it. I'm a sucker for the really long (What I call epic) fanfics. And I love Tatsuha's comments. At times they sound like things I would say. And the "Flying to Tahiti" thing has creeped its way into my speech. I'm really looking forward to any following chapters. I know I must be patient because these things take time. (But I don't have to like it. LOL) ~K=^._.^=
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Reviewed By: dbzobsessed [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2003 22:00 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I hope you haven't stopped writing this fic. I have really enjoyed it and hope you continue it soon.
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Title: On the Outside
Reviewed By: *^ ^* On: October 19, 2003 22:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent. Good job on all of the fic, really. Tatsuha's personality actually fits. And amazingly! It's a fic about him! That's good! And everyone else is portrayed correctly for once, as well (no raving/abusive Yukis or super-depressed Shuichis..at least, that's how they are in angst fics). Anyhoo, great job on all aspects. I like it a lot, and I can't wait to read more. Good job. *claps*
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Reviewed By: eep! On: October 16, 2003 01:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*glomp* eep! I'm totally obsessed with this fic! I've been reading the whole thing instead of doing my homework, but thats okay, cuz it's totally brill!
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Title: chapter 10
Reviewed By: dbzobsessed [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2003 21:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've tried to review twice and had problems so I hope this one works. Sorry I didn't review more chapters. This is a awesome fic, the best Gravitation I've read, most I start don't hold my interest long, but this one is wonderful. I love your writing style from Tatsuha's POV, with all his thoughts, it's like your inside him mind. I love the way Ryuuichi seems to keep showing up and the development of the friendship between the two of them. I know this is centered on Tatsuha/Ryuuichi, but I really enjoyed the part with Yuki and Shuichi when Shuichi feel asleep in the hallway waiting from him to come out of his study. You have captured the characterizations from the series so well. I hope you can add just a few more scenes like that one in. You left a great cliff hanger. I hope you can update sometime soon so we can find out if Tatsuha has to go back home and when he will get to see Ryuuichi again, I know he has to, it can't end like that. Anyway, thanks for sharing.
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Reviewed By: RoamingLake [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2003 14:55 CDT
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this has got to be the best Gravi fic i have read! you had me cracking up, and unable to read the story fast enough to find out what happens next! *long sigh* i hope you are able to write tons more in super fast mode ^_~
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Title: ch 2
Reviewed By: dbzobsessed [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2003 01:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have to say this was recommended by MelizaMac and I have to thank her because this is an awesome fic. I haven't read too many Gravitation fics because I haven't found many that will hold my interest. Yours definitely does. I love it from Tatsuha's POV and so far you have captured the feel of the series. I will finish what you have written soon, so I hope by the time I do you have another post. I want to also thank you for sharing such a truly enjoyable fic.
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Title: Precious!
Reviewed By: MelizaMac [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2003 21:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I almost didn't read this fic at first, simply because I thought it would be another typical "Ryuuichi the Simple" genre. Jeez, I'm so glad that I didn't listen to my first instincts! You've done a beautiful job of portraying Tatsuha as he struggles with his feelings for Ryuuchi, his frustration with family "secrets," and his concern for Yuki. The interaction between Yuki and Shuichi is what I'd expect from their relationship by this time. I like how you throw in those special moments between them. And oh, how I luurrrrvve how you've written Ryu-chan!! While keeping the wide-eyed innocent that we all adore (at least I do,) you've brought out the intellect that must be hidden behind Kumagorou. This is a well-written, creative, totally addictive piece of work, kiddo! I sure hope you have the ending planned, because I'd really hate to see a story of this quality fade away without being seen through to the end.
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