Title: Touching
Reviewed By: Veil Kuro [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2004 01:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good assesment of the nature of Dark Kamui's and Seishirou's relationships and personalities, respectively. The minute, realistic details flesh this fic out very nicely -- Seishirou has a smoker's kiss, subject to exhaustion and dropping his mask, very nice. These are small details neglected by the majority of yaoi writers. A short and sweet lime, but character has not been sacrificed nor detail shunned. Excellent job.
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