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Reviewed By: jesslin [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2004 14:51 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You wrote a lot closer to what I see, especially with Ken. The whole thing was beautiful, the emotions clear and compelling. I hated to read the end, but it had to be that ending; there was nothing else that would have completed things. --Thank you.
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Reviewed By: aya_yui On: November 27, 2003 20:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I cry when i finish the end of the story. Oh,it's so sad.I can see it hurt my soul. Ken is just kind and happy outside with deep sadness inside.Ran is the opposite. And their relationship is what i feel for a long time as discribed in this story. I like it.Thanks for your story.
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