Reviewed By: Svetla Noel [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2003 10:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like your story a lot. It has a point, if i might say so.It's original and in character,in my oppinion that is.What's more it has depth,however the conversation and actions should take a bigger part in the story.
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