| "Mine Eyes Behold" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Reviewed By: wite angel chi (not logged in) On: August 08, 2004 22:38 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
UPDATE ITS BEEN FOR EVER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!(whines) I want updates (pouts)
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Title: Great start
Reviewed By: ptbear [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2004 23:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great start to a fic. Update soon. Can't wait to see what happens next.
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Title: keep writing
Reviewed By: amyfushigiyugi [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2003 23:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you know if you would put this story up on fanfiction.net u would get about 100 reveiws so please do it and keep writing this was a really good start
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Reviewed By: Raven Crow [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2003 19:45 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I totally love it! I can't wait til you update. I was surprised that there wasn't a second chapter and I was a lil disappointed but hey the story alone is worth the wait. I like the whole idea of how they are put together at the beginning. I really can't wait!
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Reviewed By: Paige89 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2003 00:26 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i like i like!!!!! but he seems to have respect for her....so he probubly shouldn't proclaim to her that she is his......he could possibly save her, and in his anger he could show possesiveness(wich demons seem to be so famouse for) by saying something along the lines of 'she is mine'....but don't make him use it against her. Again, i really like your fanfic!
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Title: Amethyst
Reviewed By: Amethyst [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2003 18:58 CDT
Comment/Review:
hmmm
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Title: WOW
Reviewed By: white angel chi [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2003 19:22 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi my name is white angle chi and i love the fic dont worry i dont mind misspells (mabie because i cant spell worth a crap either) my sugestion is make it that sessy falls for kags captivating smiles and cherryness lets have her come to live with him and dont forget to have naraku and kikio burned to hell. he he dont forget the lemon from yr faithful reviwer white angle chi P.S. i think the discription and paragraphs are fine
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Title: UPDATE!!!!
Reviewed By: Jaxxia7 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2003 23:54 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've already written a review but I want an update darn it all! Please post one soon. I'm starting to get sick from fanfiction deprivation. LOL. Ja ne! Nefra aka Jaxxia7
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Title: Julie K
Reviewed By: Julie K [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2003 19:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 3 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 2 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
The story was a little difficult to follow due to the style of writing and the spelling. I think it has a lot of potential, but you might want to get a beta-reader, someone to check it over for you before you post. I think it would really improve the story. It has so many possiblities, with a little more work it could really be great. Although I'm an Inuyasha x Kagome fan, I like the abuse factor. I especially like how you portrayed Kikyou. She makes a really nice cold hearted bitch. Well I do hope you post more! I think this is going to be a great story. |
Reviewed By: InuGirl13 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2003 21:07 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
U have the Yay! seal of approval! Yay! |
Title: WOW!
Reviewed By: Jaxxia7 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2003 12:57 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I gave this an overall rating of 10. This story line is a great one so far. Please continue with it. I'd continue writing it whether I had any reviews or not. LOL. But hey, I just like to write and if no body likes it then :b. Please update this soon, I'm curious as to what Fluffy did to Inu Yasha and Kikyou. |
