| "Even a Blind Man Can See" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Title: Even a Blind Man Can See
Reviewed By: Tienskoi On: September 24, 2006 01:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So beautiful...
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Reviewed By: shivalatina [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2006 11:30 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
This is really nice. I liked it a lot. I know it's a one shot but I'd love to see a sequel to this.
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Reviewed By: Rowina On: September 22, 2005 22:09 CDT
Comment/Review:
I love Goku's POV, very IC. The time and setting were perfect for this moment to unfold. Goku's first time especially captured his personality, but it was great to see him get really riled up, too. Excellent story!
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Reviewed By: chidogs [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2005 20:31 CDT
Comment/Review:
This was really good. I am just finding my way in the Dragonball universe, and your fic seemed to hit the right mix of confusion, resistence, angst etc that would exist between a stubborn Vegeta and a clueless Goku. The characters seemed very true, and I liked the Goku POV. Made me laugh. Good job.
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Reviewed By: Toadsly Quinne On: December 07, 2003 21:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I thought it was very nicely done and an original idea. I liked that Gokuu was thinking things through and didn't have the magical knowledge of the "boy's love". Good work, esse.
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Reviewed By: Moonshine587 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2003 18:06 CDT
Comment/Review:
Loved it! Nice work doing Goku's POV, very in character. I look forward to more G/V from you.
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Reviewed By: I Luv Vege *it wont let me log in!* On: September 13, 2003 07:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!! That was REALLY good!! I luved it!! Woo hoo!! Yay!!! I SOOOO wanna read more of your stuff!!
*Is about to go see what other ficcys this really good author has*
Well... its just... words cannot describe the sheer brillinace of your writing!!
Keep up the exceptional work! |
Reviewed By: MeLaiya On: September 13, 2003 00:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh man, that was sooo good. I loved it. Please continue to write more wonderful v/k fics. Love them and this was one of the best ive read.
Chow Babe
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Reviewed By: kitkat On: September 12, 2003 23:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Definitely i loved it! So much that i even have no words to describe. I could almost feel Goku's hatred, then confusion, realization, and Vegeta's pain... just wonderfull.
I'm looking forward your next G/V fics... you will write more of them won't ya? ^-^
kitkat |
Reviewed By: Saiko Senshi (ff net) On: September 12, 2003 14:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
SUGOI! LOVE IT! You should write more G/V! |
Title: Even a Blind Man Can See
Reviewed By: Almost_Human On: September 11, 2003 21:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
(Stars in eye)That was the most beautiful fic I have ever read!
Truthfully though, I do love this fic. The Plot is freash, and your style is wonderful, I look forward to reading more of your work. |
