| "Silent Lies and Closed Hearts" Reviews/Comments [ 15 ] |
Title: UPDATE SOON!!!!!
Reviewed By: Hayashi Panthera [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2004 23:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well that was rude how can you leave us hang'n like that?! Well any way so far it's very amusing and entertaining you might want to add more romantic econters with Ranma and Akane. And more friendly conversations between Ryoga and Akane . You might even throw in some touching romantic scene when Ranma confesses some painful past to Akane explaining his bitterness and that brings them closer together or something like that. Anyway keep writing and update soon !!!
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Reviewed By: Darkmiko_13 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2004 14:03 CST
Comment/Review:
Update!!!!!! I will kill you if you keep me in suspense!!!! Lol. But seriously, I will.
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Title: Good!!
Reviewed By: are_en [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2004 00:13 CDT
Comment/Review:
I like ur story so much,please continued it.Hoping to hear 4rm u soon.Oh I wonder where this will lead on?
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Reviewed By: AJ-chan On: July 15, 2004 09:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Lots of parts in your fic are so funny! Especially the 'baka times one million' banter between Ranma and Akane. They're already cute together, but you just made them cuter. *huge grin* As for Ryouga not being a lost boy anymore, I think that's good. I really like it that he and Akane will be friends. As for Akane being a princess, I don't think that's going to work, because the position of being a princess is just too high for Akane to be allowed the freedom to practice martial arts and be the Japanese Emperor's assassin/messenger/something. Also, the expectations from her will be different. I think that Akane coming from a noble family is just right for her character in your fic. As for her being friends with Ukyou, that's also great. I don't dislike Ukyou, and I prefer it when all the other fiancees aren't mean to Akane (I am a huge Akane fan). I'm really looking forward to the next chapters that you'll write. I hope you post soon, but there's really no rush! Good luck in your writing! Ja ne! =)
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Reviewed By: Kagamiko [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2004 01:24 CDT
Comment/Review:
Please update soon! It was so getting good . . . if you quit this story, give me papers and I'll write the story! But than it wouldn't be the same! So please update!
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Reviewed By: Kagamiko [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2004 11:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update! I've been waiting forever for you to update! Waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa! See now I'm crying, Please update, and I'll write you a cheque for 1,000 dollars- J/K * means just kidding!
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Reviewed By: Kitsune-bi On: February 07, 2004 21:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update! that was a really bad cliff-hanger, please write more
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Reviewed By: Jenn-chan On: December 13, 2003 06:28 CST
Comment/Review:
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: residentevilgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2003 13:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update soon!!!!!!!!!!! This fic is one of the best Ranma 1/2, at least in my opinion.
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Title: la la la
Reviewed By: Ronni-chan On: December 01, 2003 03:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey are you ever going to continue with the story? Tis been a while
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Title: WHY AREN"T YOU WRITING?!
Reviewed By: Queen Klu [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2003 18:39 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!! i'm dying here! must have more...
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Reviewed By: Queen Klu [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2003 19:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are the first Ranma author i've read and i absolutely LOVE IT! you have GOT to write more and soon!!!
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Title: v. good
Reviewed By: univeralpioneer [MediaMiner Member] On: October 06, 2003 03:22 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I really like the original idea and am totally enjoying your story, but you must write more. lots and lots more.
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Title: very cool
Reviewed By: GuardianWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2003 08:30 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have to agree with jay man there - very good so far - cant wait to see where this goes
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Reviewed By: Jay Man On: September 13, 2003 21:03 CDT
Comment/Review:
Well this story does have some serious potential. Though I really hope there is no Akane bashing in it, though it seems alright so far. I really like the twist of making Khu-Lon the boys caretaker since she is one of the few strong enough to keep them in line. Will happosai be making an appearence in this fic? How about the rest of the Nerima Wrecking Crew? If you want to just focus on Ranma and Akane thats fine too since you seem to have skill enough to do it. I can't wait to hear more from you and I really want to see more chapters in this fic. |
