Title: Hi
Reviewed By: AmyAnderson45 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2003 07:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi, my name is Amy. I just read your fanfic and it seems pretty good. It would have been better if you didn't do the character profiles. I'll give you a suggestion. Try showing your characters rather than just telling us what they're sex, height, and personality is. Have certain things that make them different from the other characters. Like what's they favorite line to say? What about behavior? How would they act around people they don't know or do know? Anyway, I liked your story even if it is PG. Good luck in your writing and I hope you continue your story:-) |
