| "Escape" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Reviewed By: anbuiset On: June 10, 2004 23:50 CDT
Comment/Review:
I like I like. The oocness( is that a word?) was good. Thanks.
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Reviewed By: Kagemihari [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2004 19:27 CDT
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I lllliiiiked it! ^_^ It's very funny, so well written and cute--it's clever, that's the word I am looking for. I love the dynamics between the boys, you've got the characterizations well done, and there's no sappy excess of fluff! ^^ And a nice hot lemon, on top of it. Yummy. Very good read, thanks much!
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Reviewed By: manda aka american badass On: November 26, 2003 14:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, i loved it!!!! you made jou the seme!!! *hugs you*
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Reviewed By: schu-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2003 12:07 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
looool i thought ur fic was pretty hilarous ^^ and i liked how you portrayed seto; i usually like him as seme and get annoyed when he's uke, but if it's well written, i won't get annoyed at his uke-ness... i like your fic enough to ask you for a sequel ^__^ it's really cute!
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Reviewed By: purplechaos04 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2003 21:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Whoops, I forgot to rate the style of writing too. |
Reviewed By: purplechaos04 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2003 21:17 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Is this a Seto-as-uke fic? *Gasp*
Yay!! You kick-ass! ^_^ I love Seto as uke, and I agree- it's not written enough.
Lol, the monkey as a pillow was funny! So was "Since you have such a big mouth, I figured you must give great head" omg so many of the lines made me want to crack up, but I have to be quiet b/c my mom's sleeping ^_^ I also liked yr choice of words, like when Seto and Jou were kissing and you used "fiery" and "shiver" in the same sentence. I thought that was cool. “My favorite was yelling your own name.” LOLOLOL how did you come up with this stuff?
So, overall, I looooved this and I thought the lemon was great. It was cool that you didn't say what those little words were... my dirty and active imagination can fill in the blanks.
I am the hamburglar! Ha, you should have put comedy in the genre. |
Reviewed By: halowing4 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2003 08:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this story. I thought it was funny and I thought the JouxSeto was excellant. I didn't think Seto was too ooc either. You should make this into series! |
Reviewed By: alostblackcat [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2003 16:15 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
awww this is so adorable!!!! |
