| "Codename:ASHURA" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Title: One of the Best!!!
Reviewed By: dragonmaster86 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2004 15:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW, WHAT A STORY!!! This had to be the best I've ever read! I love how you brought out the "bad boy" side of Ash's personality. I love how you balanced all the romance and action in the story. By the way, Pikachu ROCKS with all those special attacks, I just hope he/she makes it back to Ash. I LOVE IT!!! Please update soon!!!
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Title: Oh my f***ing god this is good
Reviewed By: camintmier [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2004 10:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. This story is awesome. Please write more to it soon. PLEASE!!! I'm begging you!!! I love how you've expanded on the characters, giving them such depth, and emotion. One thing I didn't really understand... After Pikachu fell out of the helicopter, he'd eventually get back to Ash, right? The way the chapter was written, it's like Ash didn't even care where Pikachu was, or that he was away from Ash... Oh well. It's still a great story, so please keep up the good work. AND UPDATE SOON!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Strife On: August 02, 2003 01:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Finish the story, this is probably one of the best fics ever. The action, romance, and story are so
good. If you don't update someone needs to flame
you and make you update with a very large mallet in the rear. Update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: yankeefan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2002 09:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is the best fanfic I ever read! You had the right amount of everything. Please Finish!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1 |
Reviewed By: Silver2039 On: August 29, 2002 20:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Would you hurry up and finish the story! I've been waiting for some time now. |
Reviewed By: Bradley On: June 25, 2002 20:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fanfic. I do not usually take the time to review theese but this has enough of all elements that I like for me to say PLEASE FINISH THIS STORY I LOVE IT!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Silver On: June 12, 2002 18:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your fanfic was great and I really liked it. Please finish it soon. |
Reviewed By: ProPlayer On: May 12, 2002 07:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is one of the best FanFics I've ever read, in fact I think this is the reason I read FanFics. I can't wait for the next chapter to come out. oh yeah I forgot to say: I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Hanyou no mori On: May 06, 2002 06:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, this was a very enjoyable fanfic, I must say. Original, and I enjoy the romance. It has to be said, though, that you have a major grammar/spelling failure. For example, you have commas or full stops in the middle of a sentence which severely disrupts the flow of the story. You also mistake spellings of words, for example, you described someone as "idol" instead of "idle". It's nothing majorly serious, but it does need to be looked over.
Anyway, onto the fic - I really am enjoying it - the pace is well thought out, and there is the right amount of romance and such to keep me entertained. Please write more of it! |
Reviewed By: anonymous On: October 13, 2001 23:41 CDT
Comment/Review:
finish this story i love it!!! |
