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Reviewed By: Hi There Girlfriend (CH11) On: February 09, 2005 06:24 CST
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Liked it how Wufei tried to make Treize jealous. True, doesn't matter if the nurse is good looking since Wufei shouldn't be looking. Still... I was really worried that when the bandages came off Wufei wouldn't be able to see, but of course he could. He is one of the main characters. Yep, I'm happy he's going to get his vision back.
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Reviewed By: Hi There Girlfriend (CH10) On: February 09, 2005 06:22 CST
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lol. I'd really like to see Duo and Heero go to councelling. Boy would that be an experience. Somehow, I just cannot imagine it.
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Reviewed By: Hi There Girlfriend (CH9) On: February 08, 2005 08:23 CST
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I really liked getting Wufei's view point on his friends and husband. As much as I love Wufei, he's a complex character and can be hard to understand. But you wrote him so well. His fears were written so well that it made me feel really sympathetic. Still, I'm crossing my fingers and hoping for a happy ending for him.
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Reviewed By: Hi There Girlfriend (CH8) On: February 08, 2005 08:21 CST
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Ha ha. I just loved the line where Duo said that Trowa could go and build his character. Yeah right. Poor Trowa. Oh poor Trowa. And I guess poor Quatre too. And the whole Trowa and Duo waxing thing. Yeah, I think Duo would need a piece of leather to bite on. LOL.
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Reviewed By: Hi There Girlfriend (CH7) On: February 08, 2005 08:18 CST
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Squeals in delight. And yet more Treize and Wufei goodness. It just makes me so envious that there can be such a wonderful love. Almost makes me believe that it exists. I guess the operation gave Wufei some time to reflect on what's most important to him. I just loved Treize's worry. It's so sweet. There aren't enough words to describe how much I adore this relationship. You write it so well. Too well. It's perfect.
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Reviewed By: Hi There Girlfriend (CH6) On: February 08, 2005 08:15 CST
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Oh boy am I happy. There's so much on Treize and Wufei, although not directly in this chapter. I really liked getting Sally's viewpoint on Treize and Wufei's relationship. I like Sally, though I think she's a bit too old for Wufei. Still, I liked it how Treize and Sally are becoming friends. It's nice to see the two most important people in Wufei's life at least kinda getting along.
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Reviewed By: Hi There Girlfriend (CH5) On: February 08, 2005 08:13 CST
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I have to say, this is one of my favourite chapters, what with everyone being happy. Duo and Heero, Trowa and Quatre. Though I know that Wufei and Treize aren't 100 percent happy, I'm happy they managed to somewhat solve their problems. I must say again that it's adorable how Treize totally dotes on Wufei and is so patient and kind to him. It's a beautiful relationship.
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Reviewed By: whiteguineapig25 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2005 22:54 CST
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i really like this story but your 19 chapter looks like it didn't upload and you 20 chapter is almost unreadable.
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Reviewed By: Hi There Girlfriend (CH4) On: February 07, 2005 20:28 CST
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The scene where Quatre asked Trowa to marry him was too funny. Loved it how he lost the ring and all and then started panicking. Too good. Normally you'd expect Trowa to do the asking, but it's even better how you wrote it. All sweet and all.
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Reviewed By: Hi There Girlfriend (CH3) On: February 07, 2005 20:26 CST
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This is my absolute favourite pairing. I mean, they totally rock and I love how Trieze is so besotted by Wufei. I mean, come on, it's just too adorable. Yep, I like how Wufei's retained his temper. I'd hate for him to be tame. Oh, and the lemon totally rocked. LIKE TOTALLY ROCKED!!! And the song at the end, I just loved it. I'll keep an ear out for it in case I hear it on radio. Though I suppose the original version would have she instead of he right?
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Reviewed By: Hi There Girlfriend (CH2) On: February 07, 2005 20:23 CST
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Ah, this time it's about Duo. I really, really like how you write Duo and Heero's relationship. You totally don't mess up their characters even though their older. I can see Duo as an artsy person. I have to say I was shocked when Duo threw his ring in the river and expected Heero to find it. To tell you the truth I didn't think he would. I loved how Heero was able to find it by praying. The fact that Heero actually allowed himself to believe in a god shows just how much he loves Duo. Sighs. It's just too sweet.
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Reviewed By: Hi There Girlfriend (CH1) On: February 07, 2005 20:20 CST
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I couldn't stand it. I couldn't bear the thought of such a lovely fic having such few reviews so I've made it my mission to review every single chapter. This first chapter is very sweet. I really like the idea of the gundam boys being older. It is such a novel concept because it also means that they can have a life outside of war. I especially liked how you introduced all the characters. The sweet relationship Quatre and Trowa share, the strange one that Heero and Duo share and the last one, the adoration relationship which Treize and Wufei share. I'm glad he's not dead in your fic. But, yeah, I loved the first chapter.
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Reviewed By: Hi There Girlfriend On: February 07, 2005 18:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was really worried about Wufei for a bit. I was afraid you'd leave him stuck in that God awful situation for a long time, then'd I'd have been so sad. I mean it is the absolute worst thing to be able to hear people but not able to communicate. Anyway, I'm glad at the end of this chapter you made him wake up, I don't think I'd have been able to stand the torture. Well my heart wouldn't have at least. I feel so sad for Wufei, he's gone through so much, I think he deserves a bit of happiness. I totally adore this fic, I've just discovered it but I have to say it is definitely one of my favourite fics. Yep, it definitely ranks in my top, though I can't understand why you don't get more reviews. I mean, this is absolutely stunning. Never mind, I will try to rectify that by reviewing all your next chapters. Great work!
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Reviewed By: RaceUlfson [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2004 16:42 CDT
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Mmm, I like how their lovemaking suits their characters so well. Glad to see Wufei is finally going to take Quatre's advice.
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Reviewed By: RaceUlfson@aol.com On: March 06, 2004 10:28 CST
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I loved your formal and intelligent writing style, so suited to the personalities especially of Treize and Quatre. It was like the early romance novels and it really worked. I adored the surprise ending to Heero's quest for Duo's ring. I admit, the part I thought was the funniest was Treize's horror that WuFei would be doing any sort of labor at all. You left me worried about Wufei. I hope you plan to post more.
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