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| "Contemplation Indigo" Reviews/Comments [ 29 ] | | Pages (2): [ « ‹ 1 2 ] | Reviewed By: Hi There Girlfriend On: February 07, 2005 18:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was really worried about Wufei for a bit. I was afraid you'd leave him stuck in that God awful situation for a long time, then'd I'd have been so sad. I mean it is the absolute worst thing to be able to hear people but not able to communicate. Anyway, I'm glad at the end of this chapter you made him wake up, I don't think I'd have been able to stand the torture. Well my heart wouldn't have at least. I feel so sad for Wufei, he's gone through so much, I think he deserves a bit of happiness. I totally adore this fic, I've just discovered it but I have to say it is definitely one of my favourite fics. Yep, it definitely ranks in my top, though I can't understand why you don't get more reviews. I mean, this is absolutely stunning. Never mind, I will try to rectify that by reviewing all your next chapters. Great work!
| Reviewed By: RaceUlfson [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2004 16:42 CDT
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Mmm, I like how their lovemaking suits their characters so well. Glad to see Wufei is finally going to take Quatre's advice.
| Reviewed By: RaceUlfson@aol.com On: March 06, 2004 10:28 CST
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I loved your formal and intelligent writing style, so suited to the personalities especially of Treize and Quatre. It was like the early romance novels and it really worked. I adored the surprise ending to Heero's quest for Duo's ring. I admit, the part I thought was the funniest was Treize's horror that WuFei would be doing any sort of labor at all. You left me worried about Wufei. I hope you plan to post more.
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