| "Autumn Bane" Reviews/Comments [ 185 ] |
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Title: An Old Bud
Reviewed By: Ithilwen [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2003 21:37 CDT
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"Curses"? I know they usually give Inuyasha the lines that are cliche' for a bad guy, but that's a little mustache-twirly.------------ I'm pretty sure that what Kikyo and Kagome both used wasn't called "longbow." I think a longbow had to be equal to the user's height.~~~~~~~~~~~ Hee hee! Whatcha' bet Miroku has something to say about the state of Kagome's dress?~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Kagome and Kouga know each other! And Kagome seems to like him! She seems surprised to see him all grown up. Heheheh! I bet Inuyasha and Kouga have history too.
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Reviewed By: waterrain [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2003 15:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just loved your chapters.Please let there be more chapters because it is so good.So please more chapters ok.
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Title: yummy ^^
Reviewed By: Kirisame [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2003 14:46 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Woooohhoooooooooo !!!! Kouga-kun is back for the best ^^ muah ha ha ha !!! Anyway ... AS GREAT AS EVER !!!, Plus , I really do love Miroku's Part ^^ YOU ROCK, my dear, you rock !! You're really doing a great job ^^ Thanks again ^^ . Kirisame
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Title: whee!
Reviewed By: Amiboshi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2003 20:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this ficcie! Please continue soon. *Sigh* I'll be watching for more! Amiboshi-chan
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Reviewed By: Precious [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2003 12:21 CDT
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I see you have started another masterpiece. Miroku, you have been a very bad boy. It doesn't count if you shape their fates. Leave it to InuYasha to give Miroku a challenge to encourage him. (even if he does all this it doesn't mean Sango will what him, right?)Wonder if InuYasha will kill him after he finds out what the little schemer is doing. The parents on the other hand might have secretly helped to inplant the devious thoughts in his mind. That so sweet that they found something in common besides a distaste for one another. And InuYasha it's just a game! Don't shake her to death. I bet he is just still mad about her 'flirting' with other guys. I applaud Kagome for being so mature. I probably would had called her an ungrantful holy witch and threw the gift on the ground for anyone more deserving. *sarcasticly* Gee, I wonder why she doesn't like the princess? Not! What makes me mad is that InuYasha pretends not to see it. Sometimes males are real bakas. I hope Kagome and her mom have some happy times before she dies. I really liked your story. It is an original idea. I would have reviewed sooner but I had to make time to finish reading the whole thing first. Can't wait for the next chapter!
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Title: Whoa !
Reviewed By: Kiri-chan (sorry , too lazy to log in) On: September 26, 2003 06:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Quote : "You can so tell that all this is going to come flying back around like a boomerang and hit Miroku in the eye." Muah ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha !!! You're evil !!! and you're doing a great job, as always !!! ^^ I love it !!! I'm eager to se how you'll *treat* the romance between them ... I really loved the way you made it in B.G. ... but, new story , new style !!! Yay !! I'm so , so so so so HAPPY !! thanks a lot ! and see you next time ! Kirisame
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Title: Idiom Affectionate
Reviewed By: Ithilwen [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2003 22:44 CDT
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I've never seen "Swan Princess" or any of its incarnations, but it will be nice, I think, to know ahead of time whether you're going for a happy or tragic ending. . . . ... I can't get into how much more absorbed I found myself in this past chapter (Note to Self) of "Bottled Genius," just because I can't predict which way you'll go. So often, it's a given. . . . When you say that she slipped the box into her kimono... It seems a bit awkward. I know that women tucked things into their sashes a lot, but it sounds like she dropped it down her front. Might help, too, if it were established that it's a tiny box. . . . I like that Inuyasha has to practice with the sword! . . . And what's Miroku up to, trying the setup ... Ah! He wants Kagome to move in and bring Sango with her! Dilating pupils... At least he knows his stuff. That should comfort him almost as much as the icepack. . . . There are a couple of question marks where there needn't be any.
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Reviewed By: ur numba one fan On: September 23, 2003 15:15 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Once again uve done it! This is a great idea! Swan Princess is one of my favorite disney movies and with ur writing abilities, this should be a wonderful fic. I like what you did with her parenthood. Hmmmm Inuyasha thinks Kagomes is two faced....I wonder what part Kikyo will play..hope its not a big one. Well. I love it so far so plezzz update soon. ^_^
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Reviewed By: Inugurl On: September 23, 2003 15:14 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Once again uve done it! This is a great idea! Swan Princess is one of my favorite disney movies and with ur writing abilities, this should be a wonderful fic. I like what you did with her parenthood. Hmmmm Inuyasha thinks Kagomes is two faced....I wonder what part Kikyo will play..hope its not a big one. Well. I love it so far so plezzz update soon. ^_^
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Reviewed By: Inugurl On: September 23, 2003 15:14 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Once again uve done it! This is a great idea! Swan Princess is one of my favorite disney movies and with ur writing abilities, this should be a wonderful fic. I like what you did with her parenthood. Hmmmm Inuyasha thinks Kagomes is two faced....I wonder what part Kikyo will play..hope its not a big one. Well. I love it so far so plezzz update soon. ^_^
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Reviewed By: Zona On: September 21, 2003 09:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love Swam Princess, but your story is a lot better! Kagome's a lot more stronger, and that's always a plus. Please update soon! (w/ maybe some more Miroku/Sangoness added!) |
Reviewed By: Ithilwen [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2003 23:32 CDT
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"Have you done something with his hair."
His?
I think you mean they've not "consummated" their relationship in any way.
Naraku is Lord Inu's new... Oh. CRUD.
Nice move with the Lady Jun piece, and the questions about Kagome's parentage. I wonder if Jun is her first mother as well. |
Reviewed By: Ithilwen [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2003 12:09 CDT
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The beginning is pretty depressing, but with your history of amazing 'fics, you don't really need a hook.
Inuyasha percieves Kagome as having two-faced motives? Hm...
So Kikyo's got the greenfigers in this? I wonder if Kagome has any powers.
Another creepy dream that's going to make a wierd kind of sense later on... |
Title: >.
Reviewed By: Kirisame [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2003 06:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*Snaps her fingers in disappointment*
Crap ,I wasn't the first one who reviewed !
*sulking*
looooooooool , anyway , I'm so HAPPY you came up with another story !!!
You're great, as usual! I'll be looking forward on your other chapters...
Go on with the great job, as always !!!
( and good luck with your studies ^^)
Kirisame. |
Reviewed By: angelbabe17 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2003 22:22 CDT
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i love it! please update asap. ur a really talented author u no. i must have like all of ur stories in my favorites. n e way good job =) |
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