| "Autumn Bane" Reviews/Comments [ 185 ] |
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Reviewed By: Phoxy_Kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2004 12:35 CST
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8.8 That's so...so..so...**sniff** sad...My heart cries for lost misplaced love......**gag** I can't believe I just said that....**rolls eyes** Anyways..Great chapter...AND GET BACK SOOOOOOOooooooooooooooooon....~later, the phox
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2004 21:19 CST
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Oh wow that was so sad!!!!!!!! She loves him!!!!! And all he can do is think about Kikyou!!!!!! Kagome will always have to wonder when she marries him if he is having a secret affair with Kikyou!!!!!!! That would be too painful!!!!!! I hope Miroku's happy for starting all this!!!!!!! Dumb Inuyasha, can't see passed the end of his nose!!!!!!!! Update, I need to know what happens next!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: AriesNoShion On: April 01, 2004 19:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey this is a great fanfic, I mean it really is interesting and the story is just well developed it's got a nice rythm. congrats!!! ohh I was also wondering if you would be updating anytime soon???? don't worry i don't want to push, it's just that i'm looking forward to reading the next part of it.
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Reviewed By: missy melissa On: April 01, 2004 17:15 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i just adore your fic, u must write more, i don't think i'll be able to wait any longer. keep up the excellent work, Sincecerly, *Missy*
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Reviewed By: banefan On: April 01, 2004 02:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
the story is really starting to get good!! I want to know how the swan princess storyline gets integrated already!!
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Reviewed By: jess k-i [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2004 00:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey!1 ff.net wasn't working so i had to come here. it's me sweet little country girl,, or jak1 any way! great chapter!!k poor kagome!! anyway have a great vacation!! can't wait till u get back *feels selfish cuz she can't wait till the next chapter* I LOVE THIS STORY
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Reviewed By: Ithilwen [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2004 19:18 CST
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This scene seems to echo "I Want To Go Back To Where We Met," except that Kagome doesn't have the "What a horrible person I've become" epiphany.
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Reviewed By: raaay On: March 31, 2004 19:06 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i cant help but imagine what happened to any glass effects that happened to be near by 0_0 wow. COVER YOUR EARS!! i bet inu went deaf...ANYWAY, i hope this isnt going to be another one of those where he doesnt realize he loves her until it really counts. i wont spoil the ends of stories for someone that might actually read reviews(like me). *sigh* im so sad. ill just have to find some other way to entertain myself. i wish i lived in arizona...then i could save you from those nasty tigers! har har har....ahem. i hope you have a wonderful time in arizona! grandmas can be fun...if you dont let them get too carried away. visit seattle sometime!! not like i would actually see you...im just being a shameless plug for my city. cant wait till you get back!
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Reviewed By: chap 8 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2004 18:52 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
excellant
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Reviewed By: Ithilwen [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2004 17:59 CST
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"It makes a lovely change from seeing you down each others throats." ~~~ Yeeep! They were DOWN each other's throats during the kiss -- maybe. I think you mean "at each other's throats." ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ OOoh; I gotta finish readin ghtis later; ticks me off... (sings) (Naraku's in trou-ble! Naraku's in trou-ble!)
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Title: You've done it again! ^o^ oh ho ho ho ho....
Reviewed By: Kate ^_^ On: March 31, 2004 17:23 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That chapter was sad... aww! >o< But then again... i like depressing stories. O.o Don't ask. And i was all sad at the end (i wasn't really in a crying mood today though...so i didn't cry, but i felt just as sad. ^ ^) and when i read your author note, i started laughing. XD What did you write in it...4 words? Goodness i'm easily amused. ^^ But i just wanted to commend you for your ability to change my mood so quickly! I mean, you'll have me crying, and then 5 seconds later, i'll burst out laughing! ^_^ You're so cool. ~~~ So yeah. Thanks again! ~Kate ^_^
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Reviewed By: DBZ Lover (not signed in) On: March 31, 2004 16:01 CST
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Okay, that was weird, I thought my review was deleted so I wrote it again, but I guess not. Anywayz, update soon!
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Reviewed By: DBZ Lover (not signed in) On: March 31, 2004 16:00 CST
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Oh, I feel so sorry for poor Kagome-chan! What's gonna happen next? Update soon, I'm dyin 2 find out!
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Reviewed By: DBZ Lover (not signed in) On: March 31, 2004 15:57 CST
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Oh, poor Kagome-chan! I feel so sorry for her! What's gonna happen next? Update soon, I'm dyin 2 find out!
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Reviewed By: INU ROX! On: March 27, 2004 20:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story!
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