| "Autumn Bane" Reviews/Comments [ 185 ] |
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Reviewed By: Zona On: September 21, 2003 09:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love Swam Princess, but your story is a lot better! Kagome's a lot more stronger, and that's always a plus. Please update soon! (w/ maybe some more Miroku/Sangoness added!) |
Reviewed By: Ithilwen [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2003 23:32 CDT
Comment/Review:
"Have you done something with his hair."
His?
I think you mean they've not "consummated" their relationship in any way.
Naraku is Lord Inu's new... Oh. CRUD.
Nice move with the Lady Jun piece, and the questions about Kagome's parentage. I wonder if Jun is her first mother as well. |
Reviewed By: Ithilwen [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2003 12:09 CDT
Comment/Review:
The beginning is pretty depressing, but with your history of amazing 'fics, you don't really need a hook.
Inuyasha percieves Kagome as having two-faced motives? Hm...
So Kikyo's got the greenfigers in this? I wonder if Kagome has any powers.
Another creepy dream that's going to make a wierd kind of sense later on... |
Title: >.
Reviewed By: Kirisame [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2003 06:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*Snaps her fingers in disappointment*
Crap ,I wasn't the first one who reviewed !
*sulking*
looooooooool , anyway , I'm so HAPPY you came up with another story !!!
You're great, as usual! I'll be looking forward on your other chapters...
Go on with the great job, as always !!!
( and good luck with your studies ^^)
Kirisame. |
Reviewed By: angelbabe17 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2003 22:22 CDT
Comment/Review:
i love it! please update asap. ur a really talented author u no. i must have like all of ur stories in my favorites. n e way good job =) |
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